YoungSoulja vs Lawless (Hs)
 

Battle Rules:

6 to 10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 1

Check in by: 12-16-04 at 10:37 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Lawless (Hs) has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-13-04 10:37 PM.

come on dog you spit first and then I will reply iight

YoungSoulja has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-14-04 04:43 PM.

Posts: 103
Joined: Nov 2004
From: Da Lou my hometown
Status: Online
Text Record: 0-0
Audio Record: 0-0
IP: EC28 BBA2


yo,yo,yo,i challeged dis cat and he accepted/
dat was da 1st mistake he made,now he'll meet rejection/
mistake #2,dis nigga got Hitman on his sig/
i guess he wanted the world to know wat me&his girl planned&did/
da ransom of 1000g's/
and compared to dis battle,imma be livin rich and make him feel a peeve/
dae callin me da slick killah,but im his epicdemic/
and mah skills be so ill dat dae left dis boi beliemich/
he gotta cough and spit up his flows/
he needed mo' tyme to rhyme----------i just thought time just froze/

haha good luck nigga

c'mon nigga post....upppin
fo votes,so wat yall think on a niggas first battle i think i did good

nigga could you spit a verse before you ask people to vote kidd... damn... fuck it i'll go

young soulja i'm ya Admiral it's affirmative i'm burnin' you/
fucc rap you a nap I must put a perm through/

when you spit the whole state's booin' you/
battlin me you'll fucc around and catch a Who Kid? like G unit do/

i'ma be nice and ASK if you ready bitch/
then i'll make sure you get a Timbaland like Ginuwine and Missy Elliot/

the boy a g bottom line jus avoid me/
he couldn't deliver me beef if he was a Papa John employee/

you must be confused soulja you too lame to fucc wit me/
i'll disrespect you publicly and leave you cryin' like a parent denied joint custody/

I'm jus respondin to the battle we neva had/
from the beginnin' you was gettin stomped on like stairs when a teenager mad/

nigga i'm 1st that makes you the last draft/
if you gotta click... they gon cut yo ass like an 11th grade mathematics class/

these flows I fucc wit will dismantle ya mental/
and if you get on my bad side i'ma put lead in you like u was a mechanical pencil/

i'ma beast from the southeast... let me see you talk shit witout teeth/
this BITCH is a vegetarian he neva been about beef/

battlin' me? he must figure "fuck It I ain't nuttin alive"/
all I know is my rhymes is stabbin at cats like Buck at the vibes/

yo...
in case u wonderin I meant to put 6 to 10 bars so when you drop put 6 to 10 BARS iight

Voted For: YoungSoulja

Both verses were wack in my opinion.

You came with stronger punches andhe didn't even follow the rules that he posted... a mistake in the rules don't matter unless you pre-writ your verse...

Lawless, your structure was better buy your punches werent nearly as powerfull.
Both could elevate, but my votes for souljah

This was feedback posted for Lawless (Hs)
 

Yo Lawless He Said Ten Lines Fool


Battle Dq'd Young Gets An Amatik Win Peace

I know what it says I wrote it but I meant to put bars instead of that.. im'a trim it when I get on later.... thanks for ya vote but it doesn't count.... you gotta do it in categories not freepost or that system thing will come and wipe out all the votes and make us recount that's what happened in my battle wit some nigga I can't remember who but it's still open VOTE....lol

uuuuupppppin come on yall come vote
who got dis,me or him

c'mon RV can we get some votes,out dis cAT TO SLEEP

look,RV,all i need is 4 mo votes,cAN WE PLEASE
get some votes over here

Voted For: Lawless (Hs)

I'm gonna have to go with Lawless on this one...

This was not a very good battle in my opinion. you both could have come harder with the punches and the wordplay and personals. You two had the multis down which adds a spice to the reading and Lawless got plenty of metas in there but...both flows were off due to too many stretched bars.u may have a lot to say but damn..u should shorten it..the punches weren't so hard and the vocab wasnt either...those should bothe be worked on as well....elevation is the key and practice makes perfect so..keep droppin and battlin.peaceezy...

my vote=Lawless for having metas which in my opinion this battle came down to....peaceezy