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....Gone.... 12-13-04 11:23 PM

Freestyle
 
ILL INTENSIONZ PRODUCTION


INTRODUCING MiSta_AuTh3nTiQ



Yo when I spit my saliva has an tension of illness
Crushing yall lungs like I’ve got yall in a submission
Call me the Mr. Tylenol me taking you’re cold sickness
Telling your self your ill, kid I make sure that is fiction
couldn’t fold my chest if u punch through an chess board
Fucking with me is like you’re getting an long rest snore
If u was to born, to torn things up it must be an guys ass
SUCK MY DICK BITCH? No kid you’re the expert of that
No kid I don’t roll like that, I root for pink panthers
You’ve failed, and I’ve came with an fine answer
I’m like cancer, fuck with me and you’ll have limit of breath
When come against me u’ll receive an certificate of death
I’m Mista_auth3ntiq spitting these poisonus hazardous rhymes
Making your life shorter like an clock. sorry YOUR OUT OF TIME
In every direction I’m striking with hard flow’s with hard blowz
Putting on your knees, beg for mercy, and scream for the lord
My punches hitting you with an full gore, now your life is torn
Put devil & god, together in me and look what you’ve formed



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L.E 12-13-04 11:29 PM

A'ight this was pretty dope...keep it up fam! :thumbup:

Reppin' Ill IntentionZ...werd...

....Gone.... 12-13-04 11:32 PM

WERD WERD REPPIN REPPIN IT..........uppin for more feedbacks

....Gone.... 12-14-04 03:28 PM

Aight this aint kool......uppin for more feedbacks holla

Barburyin 12-14-04 03:30 PM

i think it was iight i think u kan do better tho but it was pretty hot peace

....Gone.... 12-14-04 03:39 PM

Alright Thanx Fam Uppin For These Feedbacks.......

onetimekilla 12-23-04 03:53 PM

Replyin on your freestyle
 
It was... mmm kay. it had it's highs, and it had it's lows. you need to take some lessons or do somethin because your rhymin is somewhat off. but other than that, you might could take a few rapperz, but not enough to get a little fame

Magic5 12-23-04 03:55 PM

Illness and submission dont rhyme..

This was decent though..

Better then some people here..

Macca 12-23-04 04:12 PM

Wasn't that stupid. Naw just messin this was dope. Real dope. Keep at it nigka. Whoa. Mimesis. Nice record. FUCK.

Macca 12-23-04 04:12 PM

Return da favor. In my sig.

Magic5 12-23-04 04:24 PM

^ Werd.

Im ILL son.

Holla at cha boobies.

Macca 12-23-04 04:29 PM

lol iight. Hey ya think ya could vote? They in my sig nigka.

....Gone.... 12-23-04 04:30 PM

Thanks For The Feedback I'll Return The Fav Peace Out

Macca 12-23-04 04:37 PM

iight nigka do that.

Kordozar 12-23-04 04:40 PM

Good Shit Hommie Ayo Legend Less Battle Mayn Cus I Got A Feelin You Changed Mih ..Exponent.. Password Less Do A Pink Slip Battle Who Eva Lose Out Of Tha New Breed Crew So You Down Oh Yea This Lil Freestyle Wass Pretty Good....


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