beef in hip hop(toy soilderspt2)
 

its insane what beef in hip-hop as gotten 2
but who are we talk we contrubite to it so much
now chossin sides in beefs is a must/
i think to myself well it ever cease
well there be peace/
between jay-z and nas
what would have happened if bigge and pac/
were still here
if some one didnt end there carrer
we say we just reflections like a mirror/
wouldnt ya straighten ya tie if it was crooked
just look at where 50 and ja rule took it/
thearten there innocent children
ja thearten to kill em/
he brought in EMs daughter into the mix
shadyaftermath vs the inc throwin around diss after diss /
then the source comes along and try to exspose eminem say hes racist
they coudnt lie back and just fuckin take it/
they keep callin eachother out to scrap
nowadays everyone got a strap/
it was a tragedy how we lost 2pac
no one really saw it coming who would of thought/
that beef could esclate to this level
so much drama that'll now never be settle/
a few months later b.i.g got killed
some one had a weapon conceled/
decided to use it
no people use rap like a drug they abuse it/
this is gettin way to crazy to sit back and just watch
so if u got something aganist someone for no reason just stop/
it aint worth losien everything over
maybe after u read this we'll get a litlle closer
to end all of the feuds between crews and get clouser/

uppin 4 feed back

uppin...feedback people...

yeah i like it, but im in 2 minds bout dis shit, and i know which side im gonna take dude.

upin 4 somefeed back ...

not bad............... not the greatest on tha site, but not bad

good but not good enough to be part 2 to one of ems songs!! work on spelling and it would be easier to understand!! also try to make the lines have the same amount of sylabols<(spell)!! it would flow so much betta if you did!! keep postin up yah skill!!!

if you wanna battle hit me up!!
~1~

structure :thumbdown: but good...one of the best ive seen from you...i did a like toy soldier text me too but thats not bad...keep elevating and ask me if you ever need help and shit

Didnt like it, why make a toy soldiers pt 2, you had no fight in it, you just used most rappers, or well Eminems, concept on hip hop.., this that and pac n big in every song.
The flow was horrible, I dont think it rhymed once.


Weak

ummm i liked it not all of it wus rhymein tho n iv seen betta structure but probs i liked it

lol man seen a hell of a lot better ....u cud hae done alot better sum of ur words didnt rhyme alrite just elevate,,,,,u kan do better aigght.........................

was wack you really need to work on flow vocab and metaphores you just rapped names thats wack work on your shit you need alot of practice

actually i agree with c.a.l.i