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intensify effect 12-14-04 01:09 PM

my last dedacation to V.T
 
my last dedacation to VIOLENT TYPE......

yo V.T was my home who help me develop
even had a few hard times where my facial expression swells-up
cuz everything seemed good from the get-up, till a few got fed-up
droped out N blame everyone but them-self, N had me with an attuid like shut up
cuz i've been holdingt V.T on my back like da cross from the passion-of-crist
and if u double-cross me, then u've seen my passion-to-fight
cuz like the SUN trust i'll show u all-of-my-heat
with bulles that'll twist ya stomuch like an all-u-can-eat..
but its cool, with no visa or master card... i always had BIG-CREDIT
with bitches that suck dick, thats why i act sorda BIG-HEADED
bitch forget-it, u done trip thinking I.E wont have ya skills at risk
till da blade cutt'in ya deeper then a womens clit
N when i say u need to seperate it more like ya bones from skin
cuz i got ya breath on lock, like the ozone N wind
and when u say u'r bust'in its more like BLANK-SHOTS
u can tell we different, my verse stands out like oprah with a TANK-TOP
no location, but with da hammer my girls known to BANG-COCK
N i dont need permission, i'll snatch ya watch so fast its like u wanted to change-clocks
so bitch dont act all hard and dear-me.....
cuz after i bust N push u in the water...... then the pool becomes a RED-SEA
u must want to visualize what the FUCK da DEAD-SEE,
so i'll choke ya.... till ya faces look all blue like a pepsi....
look, u da trash with a stink flow like a skunks-tril
N insted of reading ya text, people rather read they JUNK-MAIL
its like u'r blind or stupid not believein my verse da truth
cuz when i say BANG-BANG-EARLY.... its another soul in the dirt like constrction-boot...*get it *
so dont forget who DONE SONED N WHORED-YA, like tis all LAGIT
cuz i'll put ya ass on ya mouth so u can TALK YA SHIT... BITCH.....

V.T still runi n my blood-line FAGGETS....

intensify effect 12-15-04 01:30 PM

upp'in.......

im preety mad there wasnt no replys yet????

Lil C 12-15-04 01:34 PM

oops sorry didnt c dis here......dis was a GOOD solid peace, of course ERYTHING u do is GOOD;)lol but i mean da structure threw me off a bit but overall it was GOOD piece......good vocab, multies n punches.......lol n good on da creativity.....8.5/10..keep droppin

Waikiki Wipeout 12-15-04 01:45 PM

that was okay I've seen better stuff from you

why you left V.T. is beyond me but whatever man do you

7.75/10

hang-man 12-16-04 06:34 PM

^^ Everyone Has To Get There Grown Man On

hang-man 12-17-04 11:13 AM

oo-shit i forgot i give this drop a 8.5/10

intensify effect 12-17-04 05:57 PM

good looks upp'in this for more feed back....

intensify effect 12-20-04 11:13 AM

upp'in.........................

intensify effect 01-29-05 10:39 AM

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