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Raising The Shackled THeme
Wreck Leaves Verses Shackle These Peeps are Ugly Thats Why They Show Up
at night Like Jackals/ Your Bones Will Snap And Crackle And I'll Have You Burning Your Own Fort Like Little Rascals/ I'll Eat Your Bones You Must Be The Bitch In The Crew The Way Your Leader Makes You Moan/ This Nigga I Already Own Because I'll Have You Watching Rock T.V. Like FlintStones/ I Got This Hoe's Life-Took/And Kill You With A Knife-Hook// I Got This Strife-Shook/This Wife-Is-A-Rook(Rookie)// Come holla uppin or sumthing fams 1 |
Uppin....haha thats cool......
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OK good verse....make some longer....you got potential...ok punches.....nice wordplays.......fix your struture cause its messing up the flow 7/10 fix your struture...upp your vocab......
LEAVE AN FEEDBACK IN MY OPEN MIC "FREESTYLE#2(BREAKING OUT) THE LINK ITS IN THE SIG PEACE |
IGHT THANKZ man...
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