quick 16
 

Im nuttin to fuck wit like a pit wit rabies
A soldier but not the kind youd find in the navy
Call me crazy call me whatever ya want
but dont call me out becuz Im ez to taunt
You might even kill me but my ghost stays to haunt
Only death in my gauntlet step N you will get stomped
N that ice that you flont bitch Im jackin that to
In minutes Id have ya girl laughin at you
N winkin at me lickin lips like she aint never been screwed
I couldnt fuck that pig yo she came here wit you
what would that do for my reputation...
Im twice the man you are game is a str8 elevation
flow devistatin while I get high levitatin
N spit real shit when all you know is animation
Without hesitation I'll make a hearse ya transportation
dont make me angry yall wouldnt like the transformation

pretty good i like the use of multi's at the end it really made this peice stand out pretty good shit

Its not a bad piece, thought it was quite simplistic and the flow werent really going no where... Some ideas were nice, with some lines being powerful... The flow was hella simplistic, not that many multies, something you need to improve on, but it kept sturdy on the rhythm... The vocab was aight, a lot of "TION" rhymes, but there were some good knowledge words in... Try to incorporate something with meaning, or use more wordplay in pieces like this, it jus werent going anywhere... Keep spitting and elevating, you got the potential...

Peez...

word
its just a freestyle

i liked it plain and simple so its good cause i said so

yo its mad simplistic but it was just a key i know what u mean chack out im back<bitch>

word yo