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Wet Willy 12-14-04 08:25 PM

Color of Love
 
What is love.. a question often asked...
Many Times i have been close to the answer.. but it eluded my grasp...
Love is a Beautiful thing... Its the Essence of life...
In the same sense love is dangerous.. it can change your life...
I look for the answer... from the heavens above..
as the red blood drips down my finger.. i now know
the color of love..










something short and quick.. but alot of emotion..

fluidmoon 12-14-04 10:29 PM

this is a dope poem,it was short, i wanted to read more of your thoughts..lol..love the words you used to describe love, and brilliant closer to tie this all together...."as the blood drips down my finger, i know now the color of love", hell yea

Crossword 12-15-04 12:01 AM

Very nice, short... So will be my response.
You used so alright descriptions, and structure was nice. Nothing to complain about except I would liked to see more :).

If you could hit this up it would be appreciated.
Just a Vent

Wet Willy 12-20-04 12:50 PM

uuuuuuuupppppppppppiiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnn


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