im gettin better[battleverse]
 

stupid ass pm'in me about wat wat u wanna rap about
Y? u sayin u the king of lu
you suck 'PERIOD' need to get a clue
sayin i stepped to the best layin kings to rest
god didnt like u cuz ur raps suck u weren't blessed
ill leave u like a bitch rapped and beat
like a straight ho going into heat
name a real rapper from Honolulu 8- 0- 8
lines droppin so much weight turning you straight
make u wanting more have u wishing for your fate
your rhymes are worse then my bad day
droppin lil pussy shit so ima have u get it weigh

listen u still a lil choppy, but u get there
use better vocab and and try to come up wit more metaphors
jus keep droppin and u'll eventually get the hang of it

coo thx fam uppin for votes!! :thumbup:

^That was wack...the whole drop was wack...

man..that was bad

Wakk...

Work on your flow majorly

sorry kid that was horrible.

no.....mayne just.......no. u cant talk about somebody pm'n when u pm 4 votes every time u battle, u an abomination 2 rapverse yo.

y the fuck does lil' cali still have our battle link in his sig...when i k.o.ed his ass with three votes in like an hour...