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stop the violence pt 1 & 2
my first part :
we need to come up with some sort of ceasefire. If it was an East Coast/West Coast or not too many soljas on tha street gettin shot we need to put a stop to this before it gets out of hand stop this shit for your childrens furure try to understand put away dem gats , that shit is for dirty rats muhfuckerz from the gutter who be usin dem baseballbats dont start killin the streetz , walk straight on your feet follow the right path , give space for our children to breathe nomore violence its guidin u straight to your grave it aint bout surviving anymore , its bout being weak or be brave we keepin the youngsta's inside in times like this its just better to hide playgrounds turned into battlegrounds ================================================== ====== imagin for yaself how a gunshot sounds errything turns black in front of dem eyes try to say sumthin to his parents before he dies another youngsta left his beloved ones ya finally earned the respect but now u gone family of dem who has fallen already we cauzin pain dont y'all get it family of the fallen ones keep sayin " for once put ya sets away " make sure there aint gone be another death today can we please have a moment of silence the lord took u under his guidence new paths for u to cross parents keep morning bout ur loss |
upping for this one
read & drop sum FEEDBACK PZ |
it was decent mang but u could elevate on vocab...
think more then just inside the box as-well get more creative and shit... its like ya thoughts was limited yea sometimes it happens to me but i get high till something new hits me like bird-shit N un-expectly flip-out quick like a nextel phone.. all around it was decent just focus more....... 6.0 drop feed back on my open mic http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=166048 ^^ drop feed back |
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