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Jim Crow 12-15-04 02:00 PM

Heres a verse...
 
If you dont have a great intellect then this wouldnt make muc sense to you...


I’m On A Political ‘Platform’ Meaning My Views Are ‘Raised’
I Don’t Usually Act Norm Because I’m Use To Rage
Life Is Like Vehicles, If You Have The ‘Will’ (Wheel) To Go On You Reach Higher Elevation
‘Steer’ Clear Of Appalling Topics Because Conversation Passes Through Interesting Locations
But Through The Cracks Showcasing Light I See The Brutal Fights
I Know That War Is About Who Is ‘Left’ And Not About Who Is ‘Right’
Lord Knows I’m Taking A ‘New Direction’ In Life But It Could The Wrong Turn
I Try To Strive For Perfection, If Not That Wrong Turn Could Make This Song Burn
Its Said That Ones Life Is ‘Ripened’ Green With Experiences
So I’m Highly Mature Besides My Black Means And Appearances

ol'dirtymexican 12-15-04 08:03 PM

dats tha stupidest verse i eva heard ur metaphors sucked idk how u think u gon make it rappin

d-dre 12-16-04 07:52 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Jim Crow
If you dont have a great intellect then this wouldnt make muc sense to you...


I’m On A Political ‘Platform’ Meaning My Views Are ‘Raised’
I Don’t Usually Act Norm Because I’m Use To Rage
Life Is Like Vehicles, If You Have The ‘Will’ (Wheel) To Go On You Reach Higher Elevation
‘Steer’ Clear Of Appalling Topics Because Conversation Passes Through Interesting Locations
But Through The Cracks Showcasing Light I See The Brutal Fights
I Know That War Is About Who Is ‘Left’ And Not About Who Is ‘Right’
Lord Knows I’m Taking A ‘New Direction’ In Life But It Could The Wrong Turn
I Try To Strive For Perfection, If Not That Wrong Turn Could Make This Song Burn
Its Said That Ones Life Is ‘Ripened’ Green With Experiences
So I’m Highly Mature Besides My Black Means And Appearances



a yo pm Young_One

Jim Crow 12-16-04 08:51 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by ol'dirtymexican
dats tha stupidest verse i eva heard ur metaphors sucked idk how u think u gon make it rappin





I guess you didnt read what was first written in the post...
LMFAO...
Kid just battle me...

Jim Crow 12-16-04 08:53 AM

nigga who shot ya
Seperate tha weak from tha obselite
Itz hrd 2 beat dem b-more streets
Itz on nigga fuck all dat bickerin beef
i can...


LMFAO and thats some great shit from you...
Kid youre a joke...

.LeFt. 12-22-04 10:10 PM

ay jim crow are u down wit me n dre? or wha?

..Decree.. 12-22-04 11:28 PM

lmao jim The Committee is where its at roster is dope you dope we all dope come join....:).......


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