sample of my final single
 

heres a sample from my last single on my demo..its real personal, i dunno how
it will look flow wise but its ill on audio..

this one time more evident on my mind than yesterdays news
she had my heart on cruise, believe this girl wasnt jus a snooze
in the mornin it was lust......... by the night i fell for her
head ova heels like a nigga gettin peeled, id give her all the fur
for one time lookin into her eyes, knowin it was no disguise
she was the prize that any nigga wuda took fo dey whole lives
no doubt she looked fine as the sharpened pencil point
she taught me well, cudnt snort lines or smoke a joint
all day, everyday talkin that love shit never any silence
no violence or abuse with her, she said thas no excuse
got me clean as a whistle, plus on christmas we had dat mistle
her lips lusciously red like da color of mamas bed thas wut i said
body like no other, any brother wuda lead her right to da bed
but not me, she had me 'Crazy in Love' like 'Jay-z and Beyonce'
"shes way to good for you son" and thats what John say
we make magic in the bed everynight but we aint Hudini
she an 'independent women' like 'destinys child', no master like the jeanie
talkin all night but in the end it aint enuff.... thats true
we like usher and alicia cause i want you to be 'my boo'

uppin this for some feedback