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Detrimental 12-16-04 02:41 AM

Back down
 
Back Down
tight ass shit....

Acuity 12-16-04 10:58 AM

u aight snd 2 loud or 2 close 2 mic cos ur words is muffled

ur homie T.0 rips it up on every trak on ur page he got skills

overall dis trak - 7/10

Detrimental 12-16-04 05:34 PM

it's the way Sameran fucked with the voice volume....but i guess thanx...uppin....people return favors!

wez_nilez 12-17-04 07:35 AM

aiight nice lil intro....like the whispering thing very nice...1st emcee aiight delivery is ok could use more emotion...you sound like u rushed this and didnt take ya time try using punch ins to perfect different parts and get them right...lyrics r kinda simple could use more complex and deep lines....chorus was ok.......2nd emcee slightly better then the first the echo thing is mad annoying man and ruins it production is kinda weak lyrics could use more punch lines more multis over dubs not back but the echo add libs think r off man way off......liek the effects on the chorus though......3rd emcee theres no emotion in his flow and delivery lyrics r mad simple try more multis more punch lines and practice ya mixing for ya production coz production was lacking.....

Detrimental 12-17-04 10:41 AM

o come on now you sayin T.O.'s verse is slightly better? shit.....h's fuckin awesome....he'd shatter ya in a blaze battle...

GangsStarShit 12-17-04 10:55 AM

Beats aight hook wasn't feelin too much but was aight...ya seem to be a lil close to the mic thats how it sounded but you said they fucked wit it so fair nuff...work on that 2nd guy was dope...but overall good track your good and you should get better as ya get older keep it up...

...got no songs but my battle needs votes :thumbup:

20 GraND 12-17-04 11:16 AM

2nd guy was the best, he was OK
eveyone else was just random... they not on his level lol
overall 5/10
chorus wasnt bad, but voice was wierd


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