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GangsStarShit vs d.j em sce
Battle Rules:
you will loose gangstarshit....lol
6-10 lines no biting blah blah blah watever....you no the rules Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 12-16-04 at 05:04 AM Must drop verse in 20 minutes after check in. |
are you gonna except the battle or not................
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d.j em sce has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-16-04 04:40 AM.
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damn this kid is eager to get his lose..he already got this battle link in his sig and aint even checked in yet.....
your infantile style cant compete to my dexterous verbal rhapsody's spitten at a high velocity is da only way to past your loosing capacity you should have known im an mc who loves to kill people you just got murdered….so theres neva gonna be a ill sequel kid you tryna rain but im changing the forecast like a weather man im a veteran so next time stick to battling niggas dat you better than ur not even fully developed so how u gonna get da bigga picture dis aint a kodak moment its ur death in sum lyrical scriptures damn im confused its like you wanted to loose at any cost cuz even in the rules it stated that gangsstarshit already lost aight real fast spit..i dont want to accidently get a noshow |
GangsStarShit has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-16-04 04:57 AM.
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are you done yet....i need to go to sleep im hella tired...............
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*Blah Lets Murder this kid* Whoever said you were dope...musta been kiddin, Coz u only cause drafts from exhailin when spittin, You paid the price although it's free-hatin-me, And u've been spittin wack...since you lost CreatiVitie, Face it ya overrated and people jus dickride the shit you do, Ya spits are lame shit i seen bacon spit better than you, Dexterious?...u the ginger midget makin up shit all day,* And if you think your dope?...i'd hate to sce em d.j, You take stuff too serious like it's a god damn mission, And i'm afraid i can't help ya coz ya lost ya ambition, *Merking Over* |
lol...got my link all messed up...oh well lol...good luck
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well that was aight but i beat ambition.....but ohwell...
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i know...lol...i thought ya lost against him...oh well like you im tired but lets get votes in now
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yeah........but now oyu see why i put that in the rules.....lol
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This was feedback posted for d.j em sce
this was an ok verse a lil bit stretched at times ide suggest while your writing do it to an instremental and ull see your stretched lines but overall good job
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i have to say gangstar held this one down with an all around better style he was consistant but them small letters gotsta go bra for real my eyes hurt
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This was feedback posted for d.j em sce
why are you battlin newbs....just leaving feedback...but i thought you won anyway..
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