d.j em sce vs Ruffridah187
 

Battle Rules:

6-10 linies
blah blah blah
you no the rules....
just checkin

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 12-16-04 at 05:50 AM

Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in.

your not even on line so im gonna decline this battle in a couple of minutes...

Ruffridah187 has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-16-04 05:34 AM.

bull shit....i was doin other shit now just fuckin accept

Half asleep, 13, i'm still whoopin your ass
Ya rhymes break mine like cement and shatter ya glass
Ya lines is a brutal crash you a 2 sided bitch flip flopping
The farthest you'll ever go in music will be a disc jockey
This bitch cocky sayin i'm wack but only looks at his reflection
How you even set this up when you postin Open Mics in the Audio Section
I'm teachin you a lesson, correction records don't mean shit
You only got a good rec cuz you battle newbies or ya rhymes is bit
You can't see me not even a glitch your rap ability is deductible bitch
Even if it wasn't it'd still be destructible shit


simple ya'll should be able to understand it
disc jockey line...in his name he has DJ
Audio line he posted an Open Mic in the Audio Songs thing
simple like i said

aight now what is happening......i was reading a pm...oh you finally excepted after all the prewriting..but yeah

just post a fuckin verse..........damn gotta make shit so complicated ya got work remember?

d.j em sce has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-16-04 05:41 AM.

4 min....come on now........this is gettin tiresome

damn this kid took about 25 mins to check in then once he checks in he drops his verse....lol prewritten....

when i get in the textin section everybody knows im legendary
I win battle bcuz when it comes 2 spitten evrything else is secondary
kid im fresh and ur stale.....but ill admit it u got balls`
if ur a stable person im bout to make sure u take a fall`
Even if u smoked a blunt on a train u still couldn’t blaze a track
U like a sperm guzzling hoe da way u never spit any cum baks
this kid is lame he is to plain all your rhymes are basic
i up the vocab and acuzate that you cant envison my phisical matrix

weak spit but oh well

nice spit but im going to sleep.......night night.....

i wrote it on a notepad cuz i never get me structure right on the thing.....nothin wrong with doin it how i did.....you still writin it aint you? yea so it don't matter.....uppin

it took me 2 min long than you to get this done....lol....o well.....n thanx....i guess good luck....i'm out peace

uppin for botes............................................. ..........

Voted For: d.j em sce

dj. emsce definately got my vote... His verse was definately better written, with better vocab, rhymes, and wordplay... RuffRidah did have a better structure tho... but dj's was better IMO...

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