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[*¤ÐîMêØñФ* ] 07-11-02 12:53 PM

Im Back ~My Reasons~
 
This is a very quick free type i wrote 2nite,
ive been away fo` 3 weeks ... and ive had good
reason so be ... im sorry ... that peeps have been
sleeping and i havent been round to peep ish!


What once was has now been forgotten,
dreams and hopes chucked out left and rotten -
Did you ever think or did it pass your mind,
because i did now its just turned into lost time -
I still hold a love for you but its unknown,
love delicate like a candle`s fire but now blown -
As the knife stuck in deeper i called you name,
silently in my mind hope`ing you would of came -
As the blood drip out of my wounds and ran with the rain,
tears dropped down my face with this unbelieveble pain -
Thinking it was the end i prayed to God ,
that he`ll take care of you sounds kinda odd ?
My mind full of things i wanted to say ,
to fam friends ma homiies , just give me another day -
All hope lost and my life difted away ,
i wasnt gone yet but i was slippin moments put my life to play -
All i could hear was sirens hoping they were fo` me,
the last thing i saw was lights and loud voices sayin 1-2-3 -
Woke up feeling hazy momories not quite there ,
lookign round all i could do was stare -
To sore to more or even blink an eye ,
now wishing i would of died .....

3 weeks pasted since that night ,
6 to 1 an awful fight -
Red to black and blue busted face scares too,
just the lil reminders and peeps losin there koo -
Dont know what i did to deserve what they did ,
im just a gurl basically a kid -
Physical scars emotional scares still all there,
not in the mood for tests dont even dare -
Still smiling holding it all inside,
emotional scars alot worse to what you see outside -
But to move on is the best thing i can do ,
try and forget the torture i went through -
So i guess need a lil help and time ,
ma crew homiies and ma boi holden down tha rhymes -
Coz i got love fo` yall in all ways,
ima just keep brushin tha tears as they come my way -

ShaYneA 07-11-02 01:12 PM

gurl you kno i aint go tno beef wit you jsut hush ya mouth........aight........on HHT you need to post ya three links you a sa mod gots to set an example......admins say so........just trying to help you out so settle down..........but the peice is nice as i said on HHT......anyways.........yo uaint gotta get bitchy ........LUH HAZY

sorry about ya hospital run in......deep sympathy n regards

varentao 07-11-02 02:52 PM

emotional piece...but damn...thats real bad what happened...all i can say is i feel what ya saying..and gone through..but i guess its different for everyone and all that ish...anyway...i aint gonna blabber on....keep yo head up and stay strong....respect...

star 07-11-02 02:54 PM

emotional scars alot worse to what you see outside -
But to move on is the best thing i can do ,
try and forget the torture i went through -



that shit right there was deep.. iam mos def feelin tha piece..
much luv sweat and tears...

uno

Kstroyer 07-11-02 03:01 PM

this was deep yo!! sry about the hospital stay! keep droppin hot hot hot thoughts!


check out some of my drops.

[*¤ÐîMêØñФ* ] 07-11-02 08:16 PM

dang, only one runnin there mouth iz u!

Thanx yall,

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.........sIn......... 07-11-02 09:09 PM

this was very dope...
I understand where your comin from...
ur work is rhymin better also...
I'm definatly feelin dis...
And ur always gettin better..
Well Done..And Much Respect..

wUn...

The Necromancer 07-11-02 09:59 PM

Three weeks eh? All I can say is damn.

I mean, I've gotten in fights plenty of times in my life. But I aint never been put in the hospital, let alone for three weeks. So y'know, I've gotten the shit beat outta me too, but I don't think as bad as you. (Although one time I broke my finger... while playing golf. Go figure.)

You should start carrying a weapon. Not a gun though, those are too unreliable. Something like a baton or brass knuckles. I heard on the news a while back a kid robbing some old guy and using his skateboard as a weapon. Just... don't ever get in that kinda situation again. (Damn, I heard shit like that all the time back in Chicago. Never thought it would happen in a place like Australia.)

Mo-Mentai

JOeY TeRRIFYING 07-12-02 02:04 AM

i feel for ya and so do my prayers. think postive.

joey

kadafi 07-12-02 03:49 PM

sshit...

erm...i dont know what to type...

...

fuck it..
all i can say is that i feel fo ya. i got in more than my fair share of fights, i know more than most what your goin thru. jus keep ya head up.

shit hardly seems important, but the poetry anyway, was ill, very deep. mad props.

~G.

kadafi 07-12-02 03:51 PM

^^ oh, one mo thing, are you gone keep the tourney goin cause i cant wait to post next verse...

[*¤ÐîMêØñФ* ] 07-19-02 09:08 AM

Thanx ....
i do carry a knife but i just fo` got, silly~

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