Theory vs Melancholy
 

Battle Rules:

10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 1

Check in by: 12-16-04 at 03:21 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Theory has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-16-04 02:52 PM.

Melancholy has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-16-04 02:52 PM.

Check it...

Theory...there's a haze in ya eyes, let me clean that, see clearly...
You have no chance in this battle...I ain' gon merk you...I'ma beat you silly
You from South California? Why you on here, you should be farmin' oranges...
The only way you dope...was if Santa's reindeer were actually horses
Dawg you can't fuck wit me...you wanna loss, here come and get it
'Cause there is no theory in this...You gon' loose...no need for scientifics
Stealin ya funds...bitch before you accepted this was fuckin' finished...
I'ma leave you destroyed...no talent, no skill...sittin' wit slit wrists
I'ma drive up to your car...cash in ya and, blow ya brains out, it's funny...
At least you can be like Tupac...'cause ya got ya mind on ya money...

A'ight half assed should be enough I think...

Melancholy- Sadness or depression of the spirits

… He’ll take two hours writing a verse Hopin’ to Win
Then realize my 20 minute key is still Doper than Him
In research for some punchlines, I talked to his Dad
… He Admitted ur the greatest mistake he ever Had
This ain’t even a real battle… just a one-sided Fight
End should ban you…
…for having Punches wack enough to crash the site
His name fits composure after this Battle of the Minds
The Herald announced his Death…
and he still can’t Handle the Times
His will to battle died tonight, you can’t Erase the Fear
His tombstone’ll read “Theory’s punches Placed me Here”

A'ight good luck...uppin' for some votes...

Voted For: Melancholy

V/melancholy......he had better vocab an multi's his punchs were more creative also he had better structure....theory u had a good opening but u werent creaative wit the punchs all basic.....
punchs=mel
multis=mel
vocab=mel
structure=mel
overall=mel
*RETURN THE FAVOR*

Voted For: Melancholy

good verse son keep up tha good work...............holla back

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im not voting that was sopposed to be feed back i clicked the wong thing by mistake

Damn it...^^I have to get that fuckin vote removed now...shit...

Anyway, uppin' for votes...

Uppin' for some more votes...favors will be returned...

Uppin' for votes...fuckin' slept on...favors will be returned...

This was feedback posted for Melancholy
 

Checkin' polls...nice verse, keep droppin' that shit...

Fuck people...vote on this shit already....FAVORS WILL BE RETURNED!

Uppin' for votes...favors will be returned....fuckin' sleepers...oh and I might not have enough posts yet to vote so yeah...