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TranquilSerenity 12-16-04 03:09 PM
'Genius Mind Fractions'.
 
.Genius Mind Fraction's.


Some Say He Was Intelligent, Some Say He Was Dynamic.
With Thought's Of Destruction, Yet, View's Were Panoramic.
Brain Stem's Swelling, Of Consistent Flowing Inspiring Idea's.
His Mind Shrugged Off Public Gaze's, & Night's Of Failing Tear's.



Expression's Wiped, His Sweat Evaporated In The Heat Of Labour.
His Experiment's Lead Him, Down a Hidden Passage In His Mind.
Fractured Vision's Obscured His Judgement, Resorted To Petty Crime.
Passion's Were Morphed Into Tastless, Demented & Savage Crave's.
Lair Was Dissolved From The Public, Brain Assaulted Alongside Rave's.






Everything Before His Was Deteriorating, Including All His Anticipated Work.
But His Requirement's Were Too Dynamic To Reluctantly Quench His Thirst.
Knowledge Was Evaporating, From His Thought's And Mind's Grasp.
He Held On For Sanity, Which His Hand's Just Could Not Clasp.






Hand's Were Made For Science, Not or His Mental & Physical Stability.
Effort's Were Limited, Bound For His Thinking & Devising Capability's.
Attribute's Lost Over Time, Stress, Loneliness, & Overall Lack Of Sleep.
As He Claimed He Failed, The Genius Clutched A Syringue, & Continued To Weep.

TranquilSerenity 12-16-04 03:23 PM
Upping For Some Feed.

TranquilSerenity 12-16-04 04:28 PM
Upping For Some Feed!.

TranquilSerenity 12-16-04 04:36 PM
Someone Feed This Man, Shit's Ridiculous.

Mix & Match 12-16-04 05:42 PM
You definetly had the grammar and the flow in this. You had a nice opening. And your ending was pretty good. I believe I can see where you are coming from on this topic and your concept development was well thought-out. Good drop.

TranquilSerenity 12-17-04 05:02 AM
C'Mon Upping For Some More Feed.

Ysdat 12-17-04 04:43 PM
damn. this is some good shit. vocab is good, flow is good. topic is dope.
keep dropping

TranquilSerenity 12-18-04 09:22 AM
Thank's For The Feed. Upping For More.

Ill-Grammatix 12-18-04 11:05 AM
yo TS, this is some good shyt man... i think i may use this one... i wouldn't feel right not paying you though... i'll holla at you on pm when i get the chance and we'll discuss it further... like i said.... money may be involved and depending how shyt goes i wanna give you the credit you deserve, nah mean... and ya name will be on it also... werd

Oh D 12-18-04 11:46 AM
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Spoken Prophecy 12-18-04 02:38 PM
yo this drop was different from what im used to seeing
u had a strong vocab and u staye don tastk
this is hot keep elevating!!

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Oh D 12-19-04 06:23 AM
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