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Hang-Man Diss
Hang-Man Has His Mouth Open, More Then Prostetutes, He's In More Shit Then Horse Shit On A Cowboys Boots, You Aint Repping Shit, Nigka Sit Your Ass Back Down, Your Bars Are More Recycled Then College Rule, Clown, Hang-Man? Dont You Mean Woman, I Think You Do, You Got No Clue Who You Fucking With Do You,? Getting Dick Riders To Vote On Your Battles..You Suck, You Duck More Times Then C.A.L.I, In Reborn, Little Fuck[No Offense To C.A.L.I.] I've Merked You Once And I'll Do That Shit Over Again, Your Rap Verse Career Is Aproaching It's Enitity The End, Stunting Around This Site Like You A Legendary Emcee, Frunting Like You SomeBody But Really Your An Envy, I Empty Verses On Faggots Like YourSelf, Call For Back-Up, I Stack-Up Wins Like Lil C.A.L.I Scream For Help So Man-Up, Stand-Up For What You Believe And Get More Losses On Your Record, Under Pressure I'll Wreck Your Precious Record Coz I'm A Wrecker, Say My Name In Ya Verse Again You Better Be Able To Back-It, I'm Laughing At You Donuts Type Ass, Trying To Flow And Rap-It, You've Bin Owned More Times Then Kids By Play Station Two Games, I Got Nothing Left To Say To You And Your Crew, You All Lames, Sit Down Bitch I Know You Done Seen Me....... Structure Fucked Up Yea I Know |
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this was a pretty decent peice i felt the punches coulda been a lil harder and a lol better vocab coulda helped this a lil....flow fell off a lil here and there but it as a good piece..nice diss......some lines were funny.....thays always a plus....work on multi's some to help out ya flow........just being honest :thumbup:
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Good Look Upping.............
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i didnt like the peice at all to b ehonest i thought
your punchlines didnt hit hard enough and your vocab can use a lil work how ever u had a lot of agressionin this that could be felt and it basically carried your drop any ways keep elevating!! |
Okay....Upping..........
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Upping This Hang-Man Diss Mang
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I liked it...Punches really couldve hit harder tho...Ive seen ya shit man...I know u can do better than this...But, overall, it was still a solid piece...7.5/10...1
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Werd, It Was On ly A 5 Minute Thing
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i liked it but i ain't never heard of that hang man bitch lolol
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HaHa He Merked Tha Fuck Out Of HangMan This Shit Wass Decent 4rm Tha Punches Ta Tha Pesonals Good Shit Cus...
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shit was good, i seen harder but fuck it you can murk this hang bitch
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not bad, but honestly i think that this was some of your worst stuff, ive seen you do lots better but its still not bad...
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Yea, I Have Dont Better But This Was 10 Minutes
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This was fuckin garbage.
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