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New A.I shit
yea some shit we got for the album man....
song is called You kno you dont wanna fuck wit.... http://www.soundclick.com/bands/8/s...osophamusic.htm first off is Cali...then Me....then Saraan... |
it was pretty good.........would type in some better feed but im too lazy right now
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cali, i actually liked ur verse, this is the 1st thing of urs i actually didnt hate. GJ mayne fo real.
chorus was tight as fuck, diabolic, sick as well, liked lyrics of course, your doubles were off a lil at times, but hardly noticable. saraan, ur voice is wierd on this one i think, but its ok, lyrics were good quality of all is tight... song overall 9/10 |
this was a nice track, if u puttin out da CD then dats koo for it
Empire-get ya breathe up dawg, u got some nice lyrics, ya shit is ok, flow was off at nice, but ya breathe control is the problem, work on taken breathes wen u spit Diabolic-i always like ya shit but u need to raise the vocals cause ur was blury at times, great lryrics as usual Saraan-Same as Empire dawg, u still koo 7.5/10 if i coun the hook then its a 8.5/10 |
im puttin dat on my cd werd!!
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thanks for the feedback everyone yea thats going on the a,i c.d
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only thing wrong was the voice was way over the beat.... that's all..... everything else was fine.. but i had to take the other half of my headphones off my ear lol.... beat was sic as hell, chorus was str8.. saaran had sum nice lyrics, empire and diabolic's voice went well with the beat tho...... the intro was hella low tho.. :(, i listened to it again, so i say big upz.. :thumbup:
i'ma have to collab with y'all shit, a female woulda added a lil' sum extra to this shit.. sum nice shit fa realz.. dayum, stay up fa real.. pz.. |
Cali: flow and delivery were str8 lyrics was coo to
Diabiolic: flow and delivery were nice man lyrics was str8 but ya vocals were a bit low maybe raise em a notch Sarran: flow was interesting delivery was str8 had soem nice lines over-all hot ish fam keep it up |
bumps on ya face...........
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Word Thanks For The Feedback Fellows
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hmmm, i've heard all y'alls shit before, and i must be the only one not feelin this joint, but i speak honestly so heres my feed.
i've downloaded this beat in hopes to use it awhile ago, then i figured that it was too fast tempo'd, maybe twista could rip it, thats all i can see tho. cuz the chorus was hard to make out, it sounded like you overlapped tha vocals like 3 times or more on tha hook, wasnt realy feelin it. oh yea, and on tha hook, you didnt put it in the right place, it realy fucked up diabolics part, cuz it got all dramatic in the middle where the hook is spose to be placed, the first guy came tha straightest when it comes to stayin on beat, but even he fell off near tha beginnin. and the flow was choppy. diabolic, you've gotten more emotion put in to this one. but like i said, its straight till the middle when the hook is "sposed" to kick in, but diabolic youre gettin mad good son, keep elevating. saraan, your flow is most choppy, it sounds sooo.... written? like it doesnt flow smoothly at all. i like most of your lyrics but theyre just choppy. this track seems like it was put together quick or something. im sorry i just wasnt feelin it cuz that beat just fucks it all up homeboyzzzzzzz. if you guys still got tha accapellas send em my way, ill mix this shit to a more fitting beat, but thats on y'all. get at me cuz it could be a sick track with a beat change. :thumbup: |
yo thanx for da feed kids..
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no i like the beat
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yeah what everyone else said, saarans voice didnt suit the beat.. -_-
but otherwise fine.. YO I wanna collab with you guys sometime... word... |
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