next to lead
 

supposed to collab with ..wicked.. but he's takin to long .......so blahh just keyed this up

Next to Lead
Im next to none but I am the rising son
…I shine bright but my talents just begun
I was born with natural skills as young seed
….You couldn’t test me I was created to lead
….....Waiting in line I guess patience is a virtue
..Cautious, when u lead everyone wanna hurt you
……Im the next generation to guide this new world
….reality’s a bitch im just dealin with the same ol girl
…things getting twisted anxiousness of takin tha throne
my palms are sweatin just waitin for that ring of the phone
……….....im next to lead shit its been prophesied and chanted
im gonna straighten out society cause even my verse be slanted

uppin..................

uppin............................my post count

this was pretty good man.........u had a good flow....structure was creative.....ur last bar was nice....

7/10

drop an honest vote at this battle...i hate gettin slept on....http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=161728

thanks for tha feed man

bump..............

Bump bump i liked it alot, it made my brain go Yowzee...ill edit with feedback later yo..

lol yowzee.............good word

[COLOR=Blue] Good Piece Nice Work 8/10

thanks for the feed

uppin............

thats gay you those fucking ..... to make those lines look like that. damn no need for it.

i couldnt comprehend what you just said

ok ok you put dots in front of you lines to make them look like this
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yes what is your point