battle verse
 

drop feed back on this battle verse
then vote for the name you like best

I’ll “take Flight” and WRECK BK just like nine-eleven\
Cause my lyrics bring “the fall” like September, and send your mind-ta-heaven\
My shits so divine-and-reverent, it’ll make you find-the-reverend\
Giv’em ya lyrics, & say here quick, bless dis mess before KnuX rhymes-and-dead-em\\
Your styles like an L lined-with-seven, straight square-based\
While my lyrics punchin you so much, you’re gonna have a bare-face\
So get ready to stare-fate in the eyes and nigga don’t you dare-skate\
Cause IF you win it would be a fluke like the tortus and hare-race\
The cerebral assassin is matchin the BK dud, and this is supposed to be fare,-wait\
Its not that im over confident, I just know he doesn’t bare-traits, to go wit my rare-pace\\
So prepare-mate, cuz imma “punk you for position” like your neighborhood-thugs\
Yo ass wont receive one vote, and on that I’ll wager-good-buds\\
You prayed this slayer-would-budge, so you nudge but there aint-no-give\
and B-Boys need to report me to child services for the way I spank-yo-kids\\

this verse wass iight! no multis and no harsh disses, but it would prolly do.

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ayo check out some of my drops!

thanx for the feedback but if you think theres no multies
maybee you should read it again

uppin for more

ok i see ya multies my fault! its still iight about 7/10

i agree its pretty old from when i first started battlin
thanx for the feed back again

uppin

Not Too Bad...Some Nice Multis You THrew In...A Couple Parts Stood Out as Weak...I Give You 7/10....Whats Wit Tha Chinese Shit?

what chinese shit?

yo this was pretty good. nuttin to fancy nuttin that stood out to much, but was overall a good verse. 7/10

ok thanx BLAH

im leavin my sites back

Imma B-Boy at heart so goodluck wit ya site

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