let it go
 

yo
my words are compound
they hot now
cause i got the know how/
to flow professionally
i got a lot of people testin me/
but ya never gonna strip me of my credibillty
i break words down mentally
i got a sick melody/
and my technuique is flawless
i spit heartless
me and my partners/
in this rap game
well alwasy remain
were impossible to get out like a wine stain
we mantiain/
the champonship
and ya cant handle it/
we can do what ya want to do
u aint even got a name who u/
i can lose all my maturity in a second
and ya can hear me but ya dont get it/
that some one can tear down ya forces
we rollin in pourches
we burin sources/
step aside before i attack
get ready to strike back/
but ya lose ya dignity
ya punches aint even hiten me/
they dont leave a scratch
ill have a body parts detached
front to back/
we dope and ya cant even cope they full of shame
i smash open ya cran-ium/
leave ya brains dangled and mangled
i get labled/
but i aint ever gonna drop the microphone
so just let it all go/

This was not very good... your structure is hella fucked... up your vocab and shit...

but just keep writin' tho... You'll get better don't worry.

3/10

uppppppin......

Make your lines longer but not stretched. Dayum kid. Elevate. You'll get much better.

To bad you dont have any credibility here..

This could have been decent..

With a better structure, more multis, some wordplay, some good punchlines, maybe some imagery and/or emotion, a better flow, a good topic..

Pretty much goes to show that this sucked.

................................................. :spit: .