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Mystery~murdera 07-11-02 08:09 PM

ACIDIC Vs. LIL D'
 
15 lines,
NO CREW VOTES,
no d/r
no haten,
want me to spit first or you?

Acidic 07-11-02 08:11 PM

u called me out so go first aight

Mystery~murdera 07-11-02 08:41 PM

Served up From the Texas nigga in Jersey
 
lol, damn, you gonna feed off my verse? whateva' here I go.

verse
I swallow yo acid and spit it back at ya'/ I'm the verbal street assassin, got three knives but I'm bitch slappin ya'/ smackin ya' right across the cheak/ cuz ya flow is choppy, whack, and weak/ called you out cuz it was time you faced up, nigga hands up, face defeat, battle a real emcee/ but I can't even believe you battled the prophet, what could you possibly profit from gettin an ass whoopin served up like lobster?/ he was the main course and i'm the after dinner mint/ I'm just splashin you cuz you already been rolled in shit/ i smell it when you spit/ this battle is ova' I don't even need to finish it cuz your flow is worthless/ you do not burn, change yo name, you're not acidic, could've won this battle wordless/ your flow just disturbs me, perturbs me/ so swallow and choke on this mint produced in Texas and packaged in Jersey.

13 lines

Acidic 07-11-02 08:57 PM

u can rep texas and u can rep jerzery//
im reppin baltimore and also reppin philly//
y dont u go back to dallas and play for tha cowboys//
ur not gonna amount to notin except a towlboy//
so watch me melt ur eyes wit a single spit of my acidic saliva//
but u wont make it cause theirs already been enough acidic survivas//
ur to buzy workin on tryin to defeat me//
ur lame lyrics r makin me sleepy//
ur tryin to hard to subdue my fame//
once tis battle is ova ur gonna be full of shame//
ur name will be put wit tha other accountable victims i scorched//
now im tiein ya to tha cross and watchin u get torched//
now all tats left is burnt victim who got confused//
mess wit tha acidic god and got verbaly abused//

14 lines and no i didnt feed off ur verse

Mystery~murdera 07-11-02 09:09 PM

somebody do a run and see how many times the person who spits first wins? cause I'm about to change the game, lol, nah good battle man, no dissrespect to ya'

Acidic 07-11-02 09:13 PM

yo same to u man good spit uppin for votes

Acidic 07-11-02 09:47 PM

yo we need votes come on dont sleep

Intrin Sic 07-11-02 10:03 PM

LilDallas

- he was the main course and i'm the after dinner mint/

Hahah. Made me laugh.

- you do not burn, change yo name, you're not acidic, could've won this battle wordless/

Decent line. Nice use of his name.

Acidic

- y dont u go back to dallas and play for tha cowboys//
- ur not gonna amount to notin except a towlboy//

Nice punch.

- now all tats left is burnt victim who got confused//
- mess wit tha acidic god and got verbaly abused//

Best lines in the battle.

This was a real close battle, but I think Acidic won this ONLY cause of those last 2 lines in his verse. Those were tight. Ups to both netcees.

Acidic 07-11-02 10:05 PM

1-0 upin for more votes

Gokfu 07-11-02 10:09 PM

ok this was really close. i think both of u could work a little more on having ya rhymes flow better, and not be so choppy. but the punches were good. sometimes you guys didnt pick words that rhymed perfectly. im gonna have to give this one to lil D because though it was VERY close, acidic lost points for his first two bars. they didnt really rhyme that well at all.

this was a good battle though.
stay up.

Acidic 07-11-02 10:11 PM

1-1 uppin for more votes come on yall

Acidic 07-11-02 11:01 PM

uppin for more votes

Burnin 07-11-02 11:03 PM

acidic's first bar didn't make sense to me, but it's aight, the rest of his verse was ok, but Lil' D took it with better flow, and a lil' bit more complex rhymes...

Acidic 07-11-02 11:05 PM

1-2 in favor of lil d any way still uppin for votes

rar one 07-12-02 12:03 AM

Vote= LiL D

[qupte]I swallow yo acid and spit it back at ya'/ I'm the verbal street assassin, got three knives but I'm bitch slappin ya'/ [/quote] lol that first personal punch was a great way to start out..

D came with a lil harder str8 forward punchs... Iight rhyme schemes, multis were eh... vocab was ok...

He just slightly Pulld ahead you Acid.. Was an iight battle tho, either vers was way weak or way harder than either..

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