Youngun vs datboirob
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

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Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 12-21-04 at 09:48 AM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Old / expired battle close - win

Youngun has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-18-04 09:49 AM.

i'm new to the game, ill put you name in the hall of shame,
your jealouse because imma be somethin you never became...
it's fame, imma shoot you dead ive got my glock locked and aimed,
this bullett's heading straight for your brain, i like to play games,
with this fool who steps up, but gets put down, underground,
i'm the best around, your getting dizzy cos i'm circleing round,
this clown,you wish you never accepted, it's better you rejected,
i'm internationally respected, your getting annaly fucked and infected,
he feels neglected, he's wondering why i'm better than expected,
its called elevation, i use it to beat down on your head, to get ahead,
of this faggot who calls himself datboirob, who hangs on a single thread,

DatBoiRob has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-18-04 11:42 AM.

I thrust and I bust, man this flowing is a must
My emceein’ is plush, you screamin “I’ve really had enough”
I’ve got you sussed, but I’m insane remaining unpredictable
My rhyming unthinkable, you poetically pitiful
I’ll ridicule you as I reach the pinnacle of expression
I’m a formidable presence, without showing no aggression
You’re in rap heaven; my spit is similar to paradise
Please would you stop medalling’ and get off me you parasite.
My words strike like a dagger might, I’m sharp and detrimental
But I’m soft and sentimental, if a little too experimental
I experiment in rejecting my essence and changing my nature
Don’t worry I don’t hate ya, but please pardon my behaviour
Don’t blamelessly trust, I’ll spontaneously combust
The flames engulfing your lungs, whilst I’m burned blackened to dust
I do what I must, the imagery is energy, to win you see
I’m horrendously, relentlessly, pretentiously Mr. Anarchy.
nigga ya verse aint even alright
i can quench ya thirst just like sprite
ima kick ya pussy ass off this website so get packen
i suggest battlin me not become a habit
ima call you a weave emcee cuz u fake and u just acten

yo uppin this battle
 

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I thrust and I bust, man this flowing is a must
My emceein’ is plush, you screamin “I’ve really had enough”
I’ve got you sussed, but I’m insane remaining unpredictable
My rhyming unthinkable, you poetically pitiful
I’ll ridicule you as I reach the pinnacle of expression
I’m a formidable presence, without showing no aggression
You’re in rap heaven; my spit is similar to paradise
Please would you stop medalling’ and get off me you parasite.
My words strike like a dagger might, I’m sharp and detrimental
But I’m soft and sentimental, if a little too experimental
I experiment in rejecting my essence and changing my nature
Don’t worry I don’t hate ya, but please pardon my behaviour
Don’t blamelessly trust, I’ll spontaneously combust
The flames engulfing your lungs, whilst I’m burned blackened to dust
I do what I must, the imagery is energy, to win you see
I’m horrendously, relentlessly, pretentiously Mr. Anarchy.
nigga ya verse aint even alright
i can quench ya thirst just like sprite
ima kick ya pussy ass off this website so get packen
i suggest battlin me not become a habit
ima call you a weave emcee cuz u fake and u just acten

i dont kno wut happened but maybe this is u

U See My Verse
 

My Verse Is Printed Twice Cuz Im Gettin Used To The System Still Im Still A Newb But Im Comin Up

Voted For: Youngun

Youngun took this one..
punches were harder...structure was decent
vocab was aight..wordplay was ok...

Rob..shit was aight..but not enuff
decent punches..gay structure..
and u had 'okay' vocab...elevate more
tho...

return tha favor Youngun

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yo we really need some votes ....................... uppin

uppin this battle
 

uppin for votes.........come on yal this has been looked at 100 times and hasnt got a winner yet

uppin this thread... all votes returned.. lets get this over with

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