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Limited Edition vs Konqlusion.
Battle Rules:
10 Line Minimum, 16 Line Maximum No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Topical Battle, Topic Is....Trapped In The Jungle. If You Do Not Understand Our Concept's Or Content, Do Not Vote. Minimum posts to vote: 250 Check in by: 12-18-04 at 03:10 PM Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in. |
Limited Edition has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-18-04 02:49 PM.
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Konqlusion. has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-18-04 02:51 PM.
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Fear's Moulded & Shaped Into Twisted Figure's Of Vine's. Sun Searing Stamina, Struggling To Keep Grip On The Time. Undergrowth Swallowing My Ankle's, Stumbling Our Control. Bodie's Shrivelling Up, Delving Into Sleep, Sun Stripping My Soul. Snake's Snapping At The Random Path, On Which I Traipsed. The Jungle Was Too Savage, The Climate Alone Could Solve One's Fate. Boot's Were Gripless, Blunt & Torn By Creature's, Discarded Object's & Thorn's. Sweltering Heat Scarred My Hydration, Was Like Being Hung From Satan's Horn's. Sweat Plummeting Down My Body, While Howl's Of Animal's Sounded. The Mission Successful, But Aspect's Of My Survival Had Mounted. I'd Been Bitten, By Graceful Yet Villanous Reptile's, Insect's & Snake's. Patience Wearing Thin, Compass Busted, Boot's Torn, "Oh, For Fuck Sake!". Elevated Canopy's Shrouded Creature's & Minion's That Gazed For Prey. Throat Was Rough Like Sandpaper, Speech Was Denied, Under Siege By Sun Ray's. I'd Had Enough, "I Can't Get Out Of This Fucking Pit Of Chaos, & Survival". So, With A Sweep Of My Pocket Knife, Breath Evaded, Beyond a Revival... |
...All Of A Sudden...The Jungle Is Rushing Towards The Plane... ...A Head Rush...A Crash...And Then Blackness... I wake up...my neck hurts, mouth dry, my face caked with dust... ...I look at the pilot...recoil in horror...his face is brutally crushed It's an effort...but I am finally free from my restraining device... ...I look around the plane...it's like a hell in this jungle paradise I look up through the trees...the sun squeezes through the canopy... ...How come I was the only one left here...alone and damage free? A conflict in my mind...should I leave, or stay here with the plane..? ...I could be rescued...or the passengers' fate and mine be the same A hear the roar of a jaguar...the air I breathe fails to seep in... ...A silence...a pric on my arm, I gasp a tic burrowing beneath my skin Fuck...I rip it out, my red blood, dripping slowly onto the ground... ...I realize now...I am an instant target for the roaring animals around I have never feared death...but how I am a coward now I see... ...The dizzying heat...the roar of animals...the trees towering over me I hear another roar...closer now...it sounded like it came from behind... ...I twist my body...the piercing eyes...a sound of grass rustling, and a claw into my spine... ...Death Comes To All... ...Nobody Can Escape It... ...Even In Paradise... |
This is a fuckin' hott topical...uppin' for votes...favors will be returned.
Worthy opponents fo real mayne... :thumbnup: |
This was feedback posted for Limited Edition
damn this was a tight battle you both had some really really nice verses but if i had to vote it would go to LE but not cuz he is my crew leader he had more imagry and a better storyline to it i felt his emotion more as well.....but Kon had a good storyline great vocab and nice multi usage....this def is a close battle depending on how you view it and take in the verses it could go either way...good luck to the both of you
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This was feedback posted for Limited Edition
Checkin' polls...this was a very hott battle...keep up the good work both of you :thumbup:
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Voted For: Limited Edition
This Wass Deep But Limiteds Verse Made It Seem Real His Vokab And Lyriks Wass Hott Tha Strukture Of It Wass Koo And It Seemed Like A Real Life Sitaution Keep That Shit Up.... /V Limited Edition Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
That Ain't A Very Good Explanation, But Ill Let It Slide. Anyway Upping, For Vote's.
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This was feedback posted for Konqlusion.
.............Upping This Battle..............
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Agreed. We can get it removed if you really want. But anyway...uppin' for votes. Favors will be returned. :thumbup: |
Upping For Some Votes...Fucking 50 Characters.....
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A'ight...this battle is bein slept on...uppin' this shit for some fuckin votes...favors will be returned..
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Being Slept On...................Vote You Fucking Homo's.
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