OPTIKAL vs DatBoiRob
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

GOOD LUCK AND ALL VOTERS KEEP VOTING CUZ I AM GLAD TO HAVE UR SERVICES :shoot:

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 12-18-04 at 11:41 PM

Must drop verse in 120 minutes after check in.

DatBoiRob has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-18-04 09:42 PM.

Nigga U Makin A Mistake
Just Like Drinkin And Drivin
Why U Run Away
Everytime Im Arrivin
U Dont Got Flow And Ya Rhymes Are Confusion
Nigga If U Optikal Im Gonna Give You An Allusion
Bitch Ass Pussy U Cant Match My Style
Nigga U Betta Expect To Lose This Battle So Put On A Smile
So I Can Put Ur Teeth In Ya Floor Tile
Nigga U Only Have To Say One Bar To Get The Crowd To Be Bored And Snore
Ill Show U A Power U Havent Seen Before
Nigga Around Me U Betta Be Respectful And Not Optikal
Take Way The 'k' And Add A 'h' And 's' And Ur Name Spells Hospital
This Aint A Challenge It Aint Even Topical
Man Your Rhymes Is Wack And Mines Is Hot Like The Tropicals
Nigga I Dont Like U So Ima Be A Big Opstacle
Then U Will " See " What Is Optikal
Now I Know U Have Nuthin To Say
Cuz I Can Give U A Lot Of Backshots And People Would Think That Im Gay
Nigga I Got U Scared Without Usin Clips
U Tryna Sound Tuff On This Website To Hide That U Is A Bitch

Explanation:
Backshot Meanin U Gettin Shot In The Back
And The Hospital Joke Is Like U Take Away The 'k' In Optikal And Add A 'h' And 's' And U Can Put The Letters In The Order Of Hospital
I Think That Is All

Nigga U Makin A Mistake
Just Like Drinkin And Drivin
Why U Run Away
Everytime Im Arrivin
U Dont Got Flow And Ya Rhymes Are Confusion
Nigga If U Optikal Im Gonna Give You An Allusion
Bitch Ass Pussy U Cant Match My Style
Nigga U Betta Expect To Lose This Battle So Put On A Smile
So I Can Put Ur Teeth In Ya Floor Tile
Nigga U Only Have To Say One Bar To Get The Crowd To Be Bored And Snore
Ill Show U A Power U Havent Seen Before
Nigga Around Me U Betta Be Respectful And Not Optikal
Take Way The 'k' And Add A 'h' And 's' And Ur Name Spells Hospital
This Aint A Challenge It Aint Even Topical
Man Your Rhymes Is Wack And Mines Is Hot Like The Tropicals
Nigga I Dont Like U So Ima Be A Big Opstacle
Then U Will " See " What Is Optikal
Now I Know U Have Nuthin To Say
Cuz I Can Give U A Lot Of Backshots And People Would Think That Im Gay
Nigga I Got U Scared Without Usin Clips
U Tryna Sound Tuff On This Website To Hide That U Is A Bitch

OptiKaL has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-18-04 10:47 PM.

ova here 'workin' for a loss... if i was u i'd hate my day job
if daboirop aint on this site he's at www.gayniggaz@hotmales
.com
optik spit on ya bars cuz they wak n lakin spunk
lettin mommy make ya lunch the only way u pack a punch
nurish my lines kid jus dont like them to much
cawz i know u want to bite them but instead you bite the dust
an writtin ya name beside me thats the only way u next to
me chump
flex wit me punk i'll walk all ova ya lines like im being tested
for drunk
talkin all that shit but kid it's gonna be ya' death by mouth
stop it as soon as optik spit thats when ya hype dies out....

jus keyed it up real kwik diddnt even read ya verse....
an i forgot bout this

upperzzzzzzz...................................... .......

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Voted For: OptiKaL

ok i liked your verse beter optikal...

you had funnier punches and the flow was good... some of the lines i liked were:

ova here 'workin' for a loss... if i was u i'd hate my day job
if daboirop aint on this site he's at www.gayniggaz@hotmales
.com
^^ bit of wordplay... i liked that

an writtin ya name beside me thats the only way u next to
me chump
flex wit me punk i'll walk all ova ya lines like im being tested
for drunk
^^ good multies and good wordplay

datboirob... your verse was aight but your lines are too short and you lacked punches really... you had some good lines though...

U Dont Got Flow And Ya Rhymes Are Confusion
Nigga If U Optikal Im Gonna Give You An Allusion
^^ name play thats good i liked this line

Nigga Around Me U Betta Be Respectful And Not Optikal
Take Way The 'k' And Add A 'h' And 's' And Ur Name Spells Hospital
^^name play again... i see youve been doing you research on this guys name...

overall i think optikal won this... due to better vocab and better wordplay..

good battle though

return the favour link in the sig..

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