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Yupi! vs Melancholy
Battle Rules:
10 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting check in 15 min Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 12-18-04 at 10:25 PM Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in. |
Melancholy has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-18-04 09:59 PM.
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Yupi! has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-18-04 10:06 PM.
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Check this...
If you listen to any laws...then you better abide by this... Just by you posting ya name...alone it supplies a diss Bitch you wish you could spit quick...you need 15 minutes? You prolly prewrote...'cause any freestyle talent in ya is diminished This battle is finished...you shaky so I'ma call you a skippy man... "This kid is straight gangsta...he comes from Yippie Land!" Tell me...what the fuck is that, there that's my question... A bitch wit a yeast infection ya diseases ya only lyrical lethal weapon I murda this cat...but for bein merk'd this kid will be famous... My punches leave you sick...ya face just as green as ya name is.... |
Melancholy's rhymes sucks...his lines are a real breeze to top
cause really either he's dead...or my watch had just stopped my vocab's not a problem...my lyrics comes flow out real pure There's nothing wrong with you that reincarnation won't cure no he's not a idiot...he's just a amature who's also plain queer Melancholy's incompetence's a inspiration to herbs everywhere kid's potientially wack...his age is probably a whole lot of lies I mean, I'd even ask his real age, but he can't count that high I'll stab him with a fork and knife...no I'll stab him with a spoon IfI'd smack the crap out of Melancholy, but it would fill up the wwhole room |
Good battle right here...uppin' for votes...favors will be returned.
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yeah G, worthy opponent...hot battle here don't sleep people
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Voted For: Melancholy
Hey How Are you guyz doin Today? LOL N E ways Yupi* You did decent for a newb i was expectin worste but when i read you rfirst line i was expectin more then you jus let me down ya verse got wakcer as it went on ****NO HATE*** But you can ask n e one round here i do **HONEST VOTES** and they get returned bcuz i do the rii thing and i share my opinion to help ppl out........i should let you know that you will need work on your punchez--multi's---a lil work on meta's but you did good in that area for a newb.............So Thats How I feel Melancholy You did pretty good i was expectin that kinda verse from you bcuz ive voted in some of your battles b4 *** ATleast i think**But Ya verse was very good for your level and i think overall ya verse gets my vote for better everything so that how i feel ~*~*~*~*RTF~*~*~*~*~*RTF~*~*~*~*~*RTF~~*~*~*~*~*RT F |
Aight I didnt have enough posts to vite...uppin' for votes...
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Voted For: Melancholy
Iight This Wass A Decent Battle Melancholy Verse Had More Punches Disses Some Personals And It Wass Easy Ta Read So Wass Yupi's Verse But Melancholy Came Harder With His Punches And All His Openor Wass Hot And It Ended Hot So Melancholy Gets Mih Vote..................... Return Tha Vote In N e Of Mih Battles |
I didn't have enough posts to vote in your battles...uppin' for some more votes...I will return the favor if I have enough posts.
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This was feedback posted for Melancholy
weak punches u need help wwak vocab u needa read a dictionary or sunthin...other then tha it wus iight
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Voted For: Melancholy
Melancholy took this one.. had nice punches...okay persona's..vocab was decent.. structure & flow were aight..but overall Mel had a decent drop... Yupi...ur drop was ok too..punches were aight.. structure was decent..but overall ur punches could've been a little harder than Mel's..and u would've tookin this battle... |
A'ight thanks...uppin' for some more votes.
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Voted For: Melancholy
hmm, this is a good battle, basiclly, Melancholy won this one.. Melancholy: Nyce multi's, very good punchlines, and okay vocab... Your structure was okay but that doesn't really matter, and ur flow was nyce... 7/10 Yupi!: your line's wern't even dat good man, you seriously gotta come up with better punchlines, put more thought into it, your structure was good, but flow kinda off at the end, your vocab was to elementary, and just elevate on all of that.. 5/10 vote:Melancholy by the way, Melancholy, im battlin you so umm, pm me when you read this vote so we can think of a topic |
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