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......Hold the Ground......
It's unfinished right now.... but i got my boi-Diabolic on this shit.. he produced it for me, it's with the Bone Thugs and Tupac beat.. btw- Thanx boi! :)
CLICK THIS!! ^then click music, then the top song titled Hold the Ground.. :thumbup: -feedback is much appreciated- RESPONDED TO THESE.. below.. :thumbup: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=166522 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=165866 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=165983 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=165389 |
I always loved bone thugs... :thumbup:
beat was good. You were dope :thumbup: .. flow was fine n' dandy.. only bad thing i picked up was your voice sometimes lacked emotion.. but whattya gonna do.. -_- |
appreciate this feedback, bumpin this shit,..... thanx
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Lmfao At Diobolic Thinking He Clue Lololololol Omg Wait Till He Get On Again Im Gonna Whore Him Lol;)anyways Good Flow And Nice Lyrics Buy You Sounded Way Too Much Like Shawnaa On This Way Too Much And That Killed It For Me:(
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damn you got that voice for that shit...nice flow too, props.
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cali... shawnna? i disagree WITH YOU TERRIBLY.... but that seem mo' of a compliment..... lol And thanx, so insane.. :thumbup:
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I definately agree with you on the beat...liked it!
Your flow was straight to the point,good emotion, was feeling this one for sure...listened to it two times in a row ;) hehe...nah, for real, solid drop and i can't wait to hear more of this stuff cuz it's dope so keep on dropping ya shit...i'll be looking forward to it... :) DQ |
^thanx fa the feedback, i'll return the favor....... :thumbup:
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uppppppppppin' this shit........ like whoa........ :thumbup:
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ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh shut yo ass up.... |
beat is hott...
but i honestly thought u was spitting a long ass hook.... i cuaght on when it was done u was pitting ya verse, i couldnt even really hear what u were saying neither..... work on ya presence, and clarity, other then that nice flow and good voice..... |
this beat fits ur style.........i think the vocals should raised a lil bit and u need to up ur emotion other than that i enjoyed it .....stay up grl
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^^word, thanx y'all.............. i kno what i need to focus on more now.. thanx......
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Listening..
Beat is good.. or course.. Flow is pretty good throughout the track.. At times it seems like you could have used a little more emotion, but its all good.. Breath control was good.. Quality was alright.. Overall, pretty nice shit so far.. Please hit this up.. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=167444 |
word, i will......... much appreciated...... :) ....
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