MC Firetruck vs Parallel
 

Battle Rules:

8-14 lines...
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
dont even bitch out...battle me like this :gfy:

Only vote if you understand punches and wordplay!!

Minimum posts to vote: 450

Check in by: 12-22-04 at 05:20 PM

Must drop verse in 1600 minutes after check in.

MC Firetruck has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-19-04 05:36 PM.

:)Thank you for finally agreeing to this, and good luck :thumbup:

Parallel has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-19-04 05:38 PM.

yo firetruck do 10 lines..then we can get an equal amount of rate liek how some people vote they do it by ratings on each bar so do 10 and ill do 10

Ok, that's cool...I was planning on doig 10 lines anyway

Then lose smiling, don't be a pesimist
Cuz your rhymes are so broke you put RV in a deficit
You don't spit fire, if you did, well I ain't scared of the heat
Don't think you're a thug 'cuz yellow lines run parallel to the street
Yesterday your rec was 18-8, and if you just battle for fun
Why you bitchin'? Oh, my bad, it's that time of the month
Listen, you're no gangster, so stop ya fiction
50Cent_MurderInc beat you, to prove you're a contradiction
Your panties are in a bunch and you started talkin' crap, man
But now you lose...like your virginity to a fat man

Blah, 10 minutes...good luck

Voted For: Parallel

Then lose smiling, don't be a pesimist
Cuz your rhymes are so broke you put RV in a deficit
DECENT
You don't spit fire, if you did, well I ain't scared of the heat
Don't think you're a thug 'cuz yellow lines run parallel to the street
OKAY…
Yesterday your rec was 18-8, and if you just battle for fun
Why you bitchin'? Oh, my bad, it's that time of the month
DECENT PUNCLINE
Listen, you're no gangster, so stop ya fiction
50Cent_MurderInc beat you, to prove you're a contradiction
UM…OKAY
Your panties are in a bunch and you started talkin' crap, man
But now you lose...like your virginity to a fat man
DECENT

Next…


Im so sry u like fire trucks more then the childrens toy cars
I don’t care if ur an alias or newb cuz u still spit wack bars
DECENT OPENER
Shut your mouth up even if we have different prospectives
You would still pick the opposite of the these objectives
NICE PUNCHLINE
Putting out the hotter emcee’s with what your sexuality test
Yet you still like to play cars & say a bisect-me is the best
DECENT
Instead of shootin out water didn’t you tell me you do jizz
Its confusing that you love to spray liquids that don’t fizz
DECENT
At the same time you get that bisect me, gering surgery
After people start to say ms fire trucks stayin with polygamy
OKAY…

Overall…I think that Parallel took this one tho…
Came harder in the punches too…

RTF
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Voted For: MC Firetruck

^he got this with better personals and better vocab.....and also okay punches.....overall both need to elevate...alittle but not that muchhh...~1~

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

thanks for the votes..uppin.......................

This was feedback posted for MC Firetruck
 

checking the polls, i cant vote, but if i had to, id vote for firetruck...since his made sense & had personals...gd battle.

Ready to win this one, uppin' for more votes......

Voted For: Parallel

A'ight...Parallell gets this for slightly better punches...this was actually a close battle. I was expecting more from Parallel...but anyway thats not the point...Parallel came wit some funny punches, a nice even flow, nice structure...Firetruck...some a'ight punches but a lotta them was played...and your verse didnt flow too good. No hate...return the favor. Links in my sig.

^good thing you didnt vote cuz i gurantee you dont even know what personals are..cuz if firetruck used personals he would say of what a lil bitch i look like and why i wear red all the time...and how im white..and shit everything...but learn rap please..