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Un'Touched 12-19-04 09:20 PM

Un'Touched
 
Iight if you cant see i used 3 different styles expressing 3 different feelings from Angry/Hate, Cooling Down, Ta Somethin Easy Like 50
(If ya know what i mean)

Try To Read The Lyrics While The Song Or Beat Is Playin It All Flows

Many Men [Remix] (1 Bar Is The Same As The Song)
[Unā€˜Touched]
Hardly any men, wish death upon me
Tech barrel in yea eye wishin you could see
I'm trying to be what I'm destined to be
And niggas trying to take my life away
I put a hole in a nigga for fucking with me
My finga on the trigga, now you gon' see
Better watch how you talk, when you talk about me
Cause im destined ta come and take your life away

Hardly any men, hardly, hardly, hardly, hardly any men
I make these niggas cry more
Always look ta the sky a lot more
Have mercy on them..

Cant test me, keep wishin, ima mic grabbin mathamatical physician
The way i calculate the beef times two, an and half you like division
Hit this an, i'll spit back faster than a snake on speed thats hissin
An jump in ya throat till ya face glows, like the snow that i pissed'in
Im not ahead im distint, spittin out fuel that could blow out car pistins
Now listin...im the super sonic, antibionic alcoholic, spittin so hard on it
That spits so fukin heavy, u couldnt hold me if both arms were bionic

Hardly any men, hardly, hardly, hardly, hardly any men
I make these niggas cry more
Always look ta the sky a lot more
Have mercy on them..
Have mercy on there soul
Somewhere there heart turned cold
Have mercy on those hundreds of men
Hardly any men, hardly, hardly, hardly, hardly any men
wish death upon me,

Im the tonic to ya gin, that'll fite wit intent to indent ya mic,
Everyone on this board, apart from a few that i actaully like,
Maybe its one, or two, well if its u, then keep ya calm...your cool
Cause if i dont like you, ill killed you wit more class than school
Im the ultimate who reps so mean, u cant look, i wont let u see
Ma free style that'll cut ya ankles, to prove ya cant step to me

Hardly any men, hardly, hardly, hardly, hardly any men
I make these niggas cry more
Always look ta the sky a lot more
Have mercy on them..

Every night I talk to god, but he don't say nothing back
I know he protecting me, but I still stay with my gat
Lifes chase let me misplace all that mattered.
A disgrace to be replaced by the pieces I've shattered.
Placing perfection across the path that was meant.
Facing the direction away from the pockets that were spent.
Dollar signs realigned my mind towards the greeds we're born with.
Temporarily confined my lines until I designed the dream I once missed.
Pushed the pens ink deep, staining the surface beneath.
Once words and suicide meet the pain and worthless will drink.
I grabbed the cup of death and swallowed life untill nothing left.
Felt trapped and threw-up my chest, followed lights towards the exit.

Hardly any men, hardly, hardly, hardly, hardly any men
I make these niggas cry alot more
Always look ta the sky some more
Wish death upon them

Un'Touched 12-19-04 09:30 PM

Can I Get Some Feed On This

....Gone.... 12-19-04 09:37 PM

Its Hot Fam

Nice Struture Good Flow, Put An Lil Vocab In There Too Fam

Either Way Dis Shit Is 9/10 Purified Dope


Peace

Un'Touched 12-19-04 09:43 PM

Ayo Thanks For The Feedback Homie

AnyMore?

....Gone.... 12-19-04 09:53 PM

o theres 1 can you please put an feedback in my Freestyle om's

the link is in the sig fam



go check it

leave feed plz

return an fav

Un'Touched 12-19-04 10:52 PM

Common Let Me Get Some Damn Feedback On This Shit

Viscosity 12-19-04 11:01 PM

shits tight.. I like the idea, the structure I didnt really like, I mean it was even, just didnt like how u middled it.. but the vocab, flow, meaning, everything it was very tight.

Please return the favor:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=167103

Un'Touched 12-19-04 11:54 PM

Anymore Feedback _________________________

D.Zaster 12-20-04 02:27 AM

It was aiiiiiiiight, nothing really stood out though. keep spitting.

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Un'Touched 12-20-04 09:03 PM

Anymore Feedback On This Shit

The Alias King 12-20-04 09:35 PM

not bad some funny shit and over nice flow so it get a 7.75


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