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TheQuestion vs Untraceable
Battle Rules:
10 Lines Minimum No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 12-22-04 at 10:05 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
Untraceable has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-19-04 10:06 PM.
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theQuestion has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-19-04 10:12 PM.
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There's this kid called Untraceable, thinks he can come at me
what he doesnt know is that rhymes are as sweet as honey ya see, i might go smack Jay-z and take Beyonce. I have like 3 days to drop this but im doin it fast, because i dont need time you allready comin in last. You should have never accepted because im unbeatable, ill eat you you alive and act like it tastes like a wheatable sooner or later your gonna learn, Battling me just causes 3rd degree burns Im on my last two lines and im puting it in a bag we'll see what you got you half girl half fag |
i got this kid QUESTIONING where my verse will make his seem like a lessening*
he couldnt get a laugh if he pulled a KING outa his ass when he starts jestering* pressuring him to go at his best but still QUESTIONING why he even trys to rap* seriously homie clean up your act cuz you attractin scavengers like flies to crap strives but lacks sayin, "Why, the facts," never impacted my emotions so much so what kid get off your ass you 'pig' and do yourself a favor and lay off 'donuts' grown up? na you aint no grown ass man you a broke ass fan that panhandles commin like cannon~balls just so i leave ya cardboard box in nothin but shambles rambles on and on how he is the king and we're scared...but ponder of this?* missin hits but his body seems bodied from hands i lift, verse fell off, musta tripped reminice after losing askin "i did what i could, even stayed up all night to write" inspite that he aint equipped with bics so how else you think the fire ignites* *play on his name *claimed he was the king *more name play *link ot his callout in BS *bic is a lighter brand ...DONT GET IT.........DONT VOTE... :thumbup: |
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Voted For: Untraceable
untraceable u gotta make yo shit flow better-grown up? na you aint no grown ass man you a broke ass fan that panhandles commin like cannon~balls just so i leave ya cardboard box in nothin but shambles ^^^u gotta git 2 tha point wit less words so it flows better aiight thequestion had a better flow other than dis line-ya see, i might go smack Jay-z and take Beyonce..it didnt really fit u didnt come as hard tho u jus keep tlkin bout how u got tha battle locked return tha favor n vote my battles..http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=168567 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=167295 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=167003 |
Voted For: Untraceable
Punches-Untraceable Personals-Untraceable Flow-TheQuestion Multies-Untraceable Vocab-Untraceable Creativity-Untraceable Closer-Untraceable this wasn't a good battle at all...TheQuestion came way too basic and played...you need elevation fo real...Untraceable had good vocab and a little creativity...he came hard compared to Question's verse...Untraceable came more consistent and not too basic |
Voted For: Untraceable
FLOW UN VOCAB UN IMAGRY VOCAB OPENER-CLOSER UN PUNCHES UN PERSONAL UN AND LYRICS UN look up my bats and give honest votes please peace. Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
uppin votes are gona be returned honestly.......... :thumbup:
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Voted For: Untraceable
Untraceable: An aight battle from you..not your best but anyway your drop was pretty good, you came hard with your punches & wp here your vocab was pretty nice here and you came good here with your structure n' flow...and nice persona's too theQuestion: well here, I wasn't really feelin ur drop here didnt like how you kind of stretched your lines out makin ur structure look uneven n' shit..ur vocab was pretty decent here had no wp's...punches werent really there yet elevate more on them tho... Return Tha Favor Untraceable http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=168058 ^Leave an Explained Vote pleae... |
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Voted For: Untraceable
Flow goes to Untraceable..Punches where weak both sides but Untraceable got the punches too...Structure goes to Question...Vocab was a tie in my perspective both were decent...Personals were lackin on both sides..Multis goes to Untraceable... Overall this battle was weak both need to elavate especially Question v/Untraceable eturn da favor o one of my battlez fam....I got a battles against 3x,PlusTwo and Acuity pick one please |
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