just a freestyle
 

droppin dis keystyle on some fag niggaz who think they da shit/
watch ya back lil nigga i'm creepin up real & legit, as hot as it gets/
i'm elevatin quicka than quick,my rhymes is so slick it make niggaz sick like greased owl shit/
i'm reppin da clique, u dont believe it look at my sig, ya rhymes is rigged/
i'll leave holes in niggaz bigga than Biggz,2 in ya wig,so u wont live 2 even see ya 1st gig/
Eastcoast is my nigg, tha crew name is holy like a......sacred fig/
we got hot ova night......... same popularity as a fuckin mcquigg/
i'm gettin hot toastin while i'm floatin, coastin like a hermaphrodite brig/
i'm bigga than big, and i'm bold enough 2 shit on dis kid/
votin unda different screen names thinkin nobody knows wut he did/
lil C.A.L.I need 2 get a membership at Balley, total fitness watch me rip dis/
god as my witness, if i eva seen him in da street he'd probly hide in tha alley/
i'm done wit u nigga go head & up ya shit thru out dis site, rapverse/
but next time think of repercussions 4 bustin,dont make shit adverse/

this was aiight kinda basic.....you had a lot of mutlis but your flow fell off some..........work on vocab and metas.........also fix up ya structure and get rid of the / after the lines its herbish and noone likes it.......jus keep doing ya thing man.....
4/10 :thumbup: