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"This Time.. It's Over!" :-Peep N Reply-:
 

"This Time.. It's Over!"

Painted Picture Of Ya Face On A Paper
Remembering When I Used To Date Ya, I Can't Replace Ya/
If I Could Then I Would, But I Cant
It's Like I'm On A Ramp, Fallin For The Same Tramp/
It's A Laugh To Pretend Things Were Fine
Until Ya Cross The Line, Makin' Love Blind/
I Seen My Mistakes, But Have Ya Seen Yours?
Answer That Question It's What My Heart Pours/
Relationships Break, But This Ones In Half
If I Could Go Back, I'd Probably Be Twice As Wack/
I Loved Ya Girl, I Gave Ya My Heart And Soul
You Burnt That Shit Like It Was Coal/
I Can Never Respect Ya The Way I Did
For The Stuff Ya Said, And Fights Ya Did/
I'm Sayin' Goodbye And This Time It's Over
You Could Wish Upon A Clover, I Promise It's Over/

This Is A Short Peice, Just Somethin' Off The Dome..

JOeY TeRRIFYING 07-12-02 03:15 AM

off the dome but true. ive been in this postion so i feel ya. even hough ya reused alot of the same hooks this peice still came off with true emotion. and its very well put with wordplay. also was feelin the text, never seen writing like that. either way stay up and peace out

joey

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Thanks For The Props.. Uppin...

DECA 07-12-02 04:54 AM

knowing that its just off the dome makes it ten times better... Been through this before so i feel what your saying... Good shit and keep it up.... Peace and Love 43i


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