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im on the edge of just burstin-wit all tha tears that im hurtin-wit
through all tha fears that ive jerken and all tha years that ive thirsted-i
what it is that im searchin for somethin that i could never be certain-of
all tha times that ive flirted just tryna find that one person's-love
but my attempts are just worthless why is love somethin im lurkin-for
cuz everytime i look for that perfect-whore i just find myself hurtin-more
sure i respect-em but i would neva let em run games so im fed~up
so i just check-em but forget-em cuz i got my 'escape' under tha bed-tucked
ive been-fucked, i cant believe they expect me 2 alwayz have my chin-up
cuz even when i feel in-luck i just end-up feeling im pinned-up
Itz been that way alwayz, and ive tried praying in all-ways
but itz like im in an endless hallway tryna find tha right "doorway"
all i find is more-hate and all this shit im startin to get bored-wit
but wit so much more-shit im actually startin to adore-it
itz like a part-of-me and itz got me actin re-tart-edly
cuz since they started-me, "alone" doesnt feel like somethin thats hard-ta-be
im scarred-wit-these interactions that keep happenin more-2-me
i look down at tha floor-2-see that my path is just shortening
every1's gettin bored-of-me and everything seems hard-2-see
it feels like 'they've cornered-me and trapped me behind bars-of-ink
cuz i find myself catchin-rhymes just tryna continue on passin-time
but ive got a passive-mind so i think i should "caption"-mine
but rappin's-fine, whether itll get me newhere ima just have-to-find
but life is just passin-by and i havent yet "captured"-time
but this task-of-mine that i seek is beginning to seem asinine
and a broken heart sucks but ive "fractured"-mine cuz i never reacted-'fine'.....

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