The Comittee Try Outs
 

u didnt peep my free agent thread, that saddens me:(. but heres a tryout, i wrote this last week against Drastic Measurez.

His measures sure are drastic so that no one knows his bitten past, when it came to dopeness defined he just couldnt last.
DM AKA the Street Poet bit and got banned, i dont care bout your name im the ruler of this land
Just like in foot loose ill knock this "ho down", step up to me u cant so ill just take this babys crown.
how ironic this man tries to be a prophet, but hes just too little been smokin a bit too much chronic.
Tries to be accepted in this virtual world, will e date just so he can say "Ya Thats my girl."
This is the real flatline bitch, we'll call the paramedics, u drop other people's hot rhymes and then take all the credit.
Always one step ahead, even in these seeds, zero'in to shoot ya in ya heart so u cant breathe.
Hes a coward at heart, his name change proves it, got out of PSA just to go back to it?
Put some flava into his verses by puttin him in a haze, i hope his hiding days is just a phase.

Explantions: Dopness Defined: His old crew, he got kicked out for not usin Personals
Street Poet: his alias, got banned for biting
King, land lines: hes got a crown in his sig
Baby Line: baby in his sig
E-date: he is e datin GangstaGurl (thus the wordplay "..Got a girl")
Flatline: says it when hes dropped a verse in his battles
Seeds: in the seeds im above him
Coward: changed his name to get out of PSA, and nows hes bak in it.
"Flava": old sn wuz flavahazepimp

I specialize in personals, hope this is good enough.

sorry man, elevate alittle more, fix up ur structure also

well im droppin a verse against NNN tonight, so i guess ill re tryout? tomorrow

lmao batos add SPul to our roster here an add crossword<rofl i landed him to me an go waaay back hes dope... an add ..Buddha.. to the roster on this thread an add For$aken rofl i told you we would be fine go check in an shit i got the threads all up :thumbup:

iight heres my drop

I use this mic as if it is my last resort,
for when I am done with you you're memory will be distort.
throwin punches like a baller,
and you will not know the difference between my lyrics and Ali.
My A game will be like no other game for I will be droppin bombs,
and treatin u like a POW for you are no other then a wannabe saddam.
My lyrics will cut you like bread and butter,
for my rhymes are like a drug and do not take to much or you're mind might turn to blubber.
Fuck this shit I am threw with this I throw down this mic,
and give you a face full of this dick.

well thats all I could do for now ;)

Tha Only Thing That Gives Me Tha Right To Stay What I Like Is Being In A Mic
A Chance To Speak Tha Mind / Gotta Think Fast Befor I Go Blind/
Repeated Rap Self Concieted Crap/ 2 Year Old Kiddies On A 40 Year Old Mans Lap/
Yo Hit Me Back Cb83

Chief- your already in CS
50 hater- elevate and comeback also, don't put too many unneeded words in each line
convicted- elevate again change the structure up like this:

Tha Only Thing That Gives Me Tha Right To Stay What I Like Is Being In A Mic
A Chance To Speak Tha Mind /
Gotta Think Fast Befor I Go Blind/
Repeated Rap Self Concieted Crap/
2 Year Old Kiddies On A 40 Year Old Mans Lap/

and ^try to make them more even.........