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Black Thief vs .Wicked One.
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6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 12-20-04 at 04:59 PM Must drop verse in 180 minutes after check in. |
Black Thief has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-20-04 04:30 PM.
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.Wicked One. has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-20-04 04:34 PM.
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In case you didn't know I snatch souls of emcees that lack flow...
Cause honestly you suck more than what's on the other end of the black hole... An evil demon born in flesh, So I'm all about fire... I'll leave your mouth wired,& watch this bitch come up out him like Ms. Doubtfire... I know niggas that bit your style back in the 80's... They say there's alot of similarity to the way you been rappin' it lately... I'll make your posse look at the way I left you body shook... With punchlines that have the same strength as one of Rocky's hooks... All you do is recycle your best...I'll show you how leave disciples perplexed... At how they their favorite idols are wrecked... I don't even consider this rival a threat... Everyone knows...Battlin' me..? Death is the final effect... |
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you better lay low...before i use ya body to test glocks leave u wit a Halo...and i aint talkin bout Xbox and please believe my lines aint ust fillers cause compared to me...ya style is more played out than burberry tims and chincillas tryin to defeat me?God bless tha dead give you a lyrical circumsicion....its off wit ya head i doubt u really wannna toe to toe in the squared circle lyrically im gifted....lyrically?youre just...Urkel and if u dont get it....i'll "show" u how "famil matters" when they in icu viewing u wit 28 slugs in ya bladder i got tha gift of gab....leave ya stabbed while you blabber you full of gas...skills is ass....i spit solids...u dont matter im a demon...and u dont wanna match up wicked one the way i "post" this fire, you'd swear it was a pick and run I pick your fate....you choose to run Hit you like a freight...make u lose a lung the only thing wicked bout tha kid will be his stagger cause after im through wit him....his lips gonna be like mick jagger's have his chest stabbed by daggers... and get him dumped in plastic...call me ya local bagger |
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Voted For: .Wicked One.
Black Theif whoa long time no see you in awhile...but anyway i think your mad rusty or i just havent ever seen you write befpre...but shit that was weak mayn..your punches were there but they werent to strong...the wordplay was there but they werent there in a way...you had a few forced lines...i couldent put up with...no hate Wicked One hmm probably the worst stucture ive ever seen from you and also flow due to both of you running low on flow...i give this one to you wicked...even know the stucture was more worse...but actually you had good punchlines with witty metaphores in them and actually both had a good vocab..so this was a good battle...wicked jsut barlly got this...pz return the favour in one of the battles in my sig..hopefully me vs. epic..mad slet on sense liek month ago..please help me close it |
Voted For: Black Thief
Vote: BT Opener: BT - nice Closer: BT Lyrics: tied Vocab: Wicked One Punches: BT Personals: neitha really Multis: Wicked One. - got a few poppin off Wordplay" BT Originality: BT - closer and urkel..lol Structure: tied - both uses same type of structure BT - 8/10 Wicked One - 7/10 |
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Voted For: .Wicked One.
hmm basically wicked one killed black theif with his first 6 lines... they were all dope and the only real dope line from black thief was his opener about halo... which i must say was like 9.5/10 :thumbup: but wicked one had better structure in some areas and a way better flow better multies better wordplay harder punches and stayed more consistent.. black thief u still got that same style u used to have... let go of it make your lines the same length or even close to the same length get better flow and wordplay harder punch more complexity and consistency.. some of that applies to you also wicked one but you definately took this battle vote: W.O return the favor in my sig only honest explained votes |
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dont sweat it thief......you came hard. just accept the honest feed and use it as best as you can bruh. you handled shit though. also, thief.........wheres the siggy? lol. good job battlecats........very nice work. hold it down. s.v............c.s. |
Voted For: .Wicked One.
Black Thief: you better lay low...before i use ya body to test glocks leave u wit a Halo...and i aint talkin bout Xbox Attempted multis here, punch wasn't that hard and please believe my lines aint ust fillers cause compared to me...ya style is more played out than burberry tims and chincillas Weak... tryin to defeat me?God bless tha dead give you a lyrical circumsicion....its off wit ya head Circumsicion doesn't evolve cutting off someone's head i doubt u really wannna toe to toe in the squared circle lyrically im gifted....lyrically?youre just...Urkel Weak... and if u dont get it....i'll "show" u how "famil matters" when they in icu viewing u wit 28 slugs in ya bladder No punch... i got tha gift of gab....leave ya stabbed while you blabber you full of gas...skills is ass....i spit solids...u dont matter Attempted a meta, didn't work... im a demon...and u dont wanna match up wicked one the way i "post" this fire, you'd swear it was a pick and run Weak... I pick your fate....you choose to run Hit you like a freight...make u lose a lung Weak, punch didn't hit the only thing wicked bout tha kid will be his stagger cause after im through wit him....his lips gonna be like mick jagger's ^wtf??? have his chest stabbed by daggers... and get him dumped in plastic...call me ya local bagger Weak closer Wicked One: In case you didn't know I snatch souls of emcees that lack flow... Cause honestly you suck more than what's on the other end of the black hole... Decent multis, punch wasn't that hard An evil demon born in flesh, So I'm all about fire... I'll leave your mouth wired,& watch this bitch come up out him like Ms. Doubtfire... Decent punch I know niggas that bit your style back in the 80's... They say there's alot of similarity to the way you been rappin' it lately... ...no punch I'll make your posse look at the way I left you body shook... With punchlines that have the same strength as one of Rocky's hooks... Self-glory, 'nuff said All you do is recycle your best...I'll show you how leave disciples perplexed... At how they their favorite idols are wrecked... No punch I don't even consider this rival a threat... Everyone knows...Battlin' me..? Death is the final effect... Self-glory, weak closer I give this to Wicked, because even though he dropped an ass verse, it was still better then Thief's. No hate though, just an honest vote. RTF @ a link in my sig, honest explained votes only:thumbup: |
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