Trojan... vs Cuban~Storm
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 12 Lines
No Crew Votes
NO D/R Votes
No Hate Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
etc

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 12-23-04 at 07:42 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Trojan... has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-20-04 07:46 PM.

Cuban~Storm has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-20-04 08:31 PM.

Cuban~Storm:

don't even pretend ur ill, ya wack.. imma reveal him
i'd put my two pennies in... but he'd prolly steal 'em
i don't expect u to show against me.. frankly who would
u aint commin close to a tie.. only thing u'll draw.. is blood
i'm getting dangerous and it's fair for me to say goodbye
chuz..
i'm grabbing the scissors and cutting..........off ur air supply
cuban is definatly cutting edge.........of the front lawn
and there's no need for a menu
.................especially when i'm cooking up a storm

This was feedback posted for Trojan...
 

.............................................just checking the polls.

upin for an easy win............................................... ......................

uppin for an eazy win bitches

Voted For: Cuban~Storm

Wow umm Ill Take The Time to Give A Detailed explanation on This Battle

Trojan
To Start off with You Id like To Say you Structure Was the first thing That I saw That was jus Fucked Up.....Then I Read Ya Verse and at the beggining It had A Decent flow but then At The End You wont rymin and it seems like you were jus tryin to talk and not rap,,,,,,,umm Basically You need to work On Ya Style all Over Bcuz you Seriously Fucked this verse Up
No Hate Mayne Jus Speakin My opinion

Cuban~Storm
I Liked ya verse and I Like the way You Held That Same Rythm and Flow Throught The whole verse ...I didnt See any Flaws with your Punchez and Personals Bcuz they Are Str8.....Um The only Thing i can Say Is Try to Work On Multi's But Thats Not No Big problem when Ya Got a Verse like your but thats What i Say you Were Missing So.....There.

Please Take The Time To RTF In My battle ..I Only have One Battle And I Think It Wouldnt Hurt You To RTF Thanx

This was feedback posted for Trojan...
 

checkin pollz........

This was feedback posted for Cuban~Storm
 

Nice Cuban~storm Keep It Up Uppin For My Nikkah Cuban Werdness

fuckin' kids...not knowing how to vote................wackness

up-up-up and away!

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uppin for an easy win.....................................

Voted For: Cuban~Storm

don't even pretend ur ill, ya wack.. imma reveal him
i'd put my two pennies in... but he'd prolly steal 'em
…no
i don't expect u to show against me.. frankly who would
u aint commin close to a tie.. only thing u'll draw.. is blood
okay
i'm getting dangerous and it's fair for me to say goodbye
chuz..
i'm grabbing the scissors and cutting..........off ur air supply
decent
cuban is definatly cutting edge.........of the front lawn
and there's no need for a menu
.................especially when i'm cooking up a storm
okay

Yes it’s Cuban~Storm reigning RV and on this Rain Coat bitch
So you think ya ruff around the edges I think not and I’m a lunatic
decent
So you “smooth with the ladies” but you look like a pussy this time
But its true wat they say you could be a dick...well not mine
good
Trojan can’t deal with the fact that my rhymes are much hotter
This bitch is too dumb, that he looses himself while he wonders
good…
So there’s no question, that to me you’re no contestant
So now I confess this, that I once was and still am blessed
…okay
No more need of a bitch wit protection let alone lubricated
So I’m done...cuz once I bust, this Trojan gets wasted
decent closer

Overall C~S took this one…punches were just plain-harder
And the structure + flow was good with it…Trojan came weak