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Black Queen vs Devistation
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6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting No Hate votes Accept ASAP. Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 12-21-04 at 10:10 PM Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in. |
Black Queen has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-20-04 10:12 PM.
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Devistation has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-20-04 10:15 PM.
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I will show this here wench, the real drama in my wicked voice,
You have alot of "Balls" Battlin me, which was a wicked choice, She couldn't condense style if she had the right to go out Tonight, Steppin to me is a sure fight, this battle will be won in fright. You couldn't be seen if you were pure one hundred percent light. People do not recognize a girl with tallent, This is no challenge, I will rip your soul out and kill you over again, with my tallon. Your gihts have run out its time to surneder, to bury the hatchet, If you grew any real tranquility skills, I'd be sure to snatch it. The ending of this is the fairytale that you once resited in bed, The wolf was murded, to you I will do, What happened to Lil' red. |
here I go again ...........
Da Queen steps in You aint bringin INTENSIVE CRIMEz...you must have a senseless mind.... When I vent this rhyme you'll be shouting writers "block" from my "Offensive Lines".... I'm tha demented Kind, i'll give you a jamaican clappin - I makes it happen.... But you're like artificial Gift Paper because you are the "fakest rapping"... I'll Break his back in...wit flagrent action more hype than an epileptic Bruce Lee... Fukk using a written!!...I'll break a branch off and beat you wit a "loose leaf"!!!.... Reduce Speech..don't talk-shit i'll bang ya teeth in for breathin you heathen... Plus you're frequently-feinding anytime someone on this site is speakin of semen... You're sleepin and dreamin...but faggots like u wake up wit a Pain in the Ass... School Me?...you were wit a group of "Amputees" and still the only "lame" in the class...lol None of this "head's lines" connect as if he was a "Parkinsons Barber".... But my Personals send "EDUCATED SHOTS" like a Marksman-from-Harvard... I'm remarkable partna, how can you be claimin you a god of rap when you constantly Praise me...?? That nonsense is shady...thoughts of his father molesting haunting him daily... You're taunting me gayly...wit broken wrists...i'll slap u wit an open Fist.... then strangle you wit a rope and twist...just because you're RN's token bitch. |
uppin fo some votes...................................
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Voted For: Black Queen
black queen one hands down her punches where harder and her rhyme scheme was tighter favoite lines You aint bringin INTENSIVE CRIMEz...you must have a senseless mind.... When I vent this rhyme you'll be shouting writers "block" from my "Offensive Lines".... I'm tha demented Kind, i'll give you a jamaican clappin - I makes it happen.... But you're like artificial Gift Paper because you are the "fakest rapping"... I'll Break his back in...wit flagrent action more hype than an epileptic Bruce Lee... Fukk using a written!!...I'll break a branch off and beat you wit a "loose leaf"!!!.... Reduce Speech..don't talk-shit i'll bang ya teeth in for breathin you heathen... Plus you're frequently-feinding anytime someone on this site is speakin of semen... |
^^^ You ned to Explain mroe dude....
Uppin........ |
he explained dat very well dont get mad cause i got his vote thx fo da vote
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Voted For: Black Queen
lol This battle was hot .....made me laugh alot but heres how i break it down punchez--BQ personals--D multi--BQ Metas--BQ Vocab--D Structure--BQ Thats Jus how i feel ...........others may feel different............... ..............Do Me A favor and vote in my battle against hangman Bcuz its alomst over if yall to jus go n there and vote bcuz i got this battle all the way..........but if you feel i lost then thats you .......but jus go n vote honestly one |
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Voted For: Black Queen
devist... your verse was cool and mildly entertaining. no hate, but i felt you could have come at her way harder then you did. no sweat. try to work on your personals and punches. throw some multies in there too to spike your work up....i think it helps. your structure was on point.....nice. keep up the good work pimp. queen... you outclassed the kid in this battle. your multies, punches, and personals were on point. plus you threw in some nice vocab to spice up your piece some. the only thing that you need to work on is your structure...other then that, your good. nice job. hold it down. one. s.v.............c.s. |
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