bent politicians
 

HIPPOCRITICAL, is what I call the PHYSICAL,
of the American government (it’s the army!!), it’d be a MIRACLE,
if they could help to sort out the situation in the WEST BANK, opposing forces fight over land they BOTH LACK,
Israel assasinate INNOCENTS and Palestine terrorists, then they murder BACK,
see looks here to understand the effect of IGNORANCE,
commitin terror and CONSIDERIN’ the time we LIVIN’ IN , the world is ruled by racist, corrupt and fat cat MILITANTS,

20 million people die from contractin HIV
spreading over the 3rd world a disease equally destroyin MENTALLY as PHYSICALLY,
combine this to FAMINE so when a food package arrives people be CRAMMIN’,
but at the same time, the UN be SLAMMIN’, bombs on their HOMELAND.
Helpin to sort out does not instantaneously, lead onto VIOLENCE,
racist blacks murder white farmers and Mugabe remains in SILENCE,
but im still worryin bout, how im gonna get the next payment of my rent thats what i agreed
Now what does that say about me ?

Aight hit me up please

kinda short but some nice wordplay and a solid flow makes it a pretty dope verse no real beef with it dope shit keep it up

the first half dat was pretty good. tailed off a bit towards the end though. yeah...i'm feelin it. i like the concept a lot.

anyway dogg, what i really came in here to ask was this: me an no mercy startin a crew fo UK cats (peep tha sig) was wonderin if u wanted in? i can remember some ish you posted a while back in open mic. LOL, you not very active tho..

anyways, hoLLa..

Yea im down wiv it but im gonna be around for a couple o months then im off to tokyo for a year. Im workin alot too and out at night so i aint really got a chance to post much shit. but if ya wanna do jus im me on yahoo or msn im kmfrob on both of em.

the political angle hasnt been used inna while, good use of imagery in places of this piece as well. a little short of good rhymes in places, but pretty decent overall.

uppin

TO DEEP TO BE SO SHORT EXPAND YO THIS WAS HOT

k lol ill be doin sum other concept next time but ill make it longer

yo i was likin tis tha whole conept has a direct approach to everything just about keep it up