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LaDy TrInItY 07-12-02 09:33 AM

Whats in I love you
 
Once thought of love as a special gift from that special person.//
But now Its hard to even begin the word I can't say it.//
Decepion and grief, I wont believe intil comes along that special person.//
But when will I know he has come, I have to think and sit.//
How will I know he wont break my heart like the rest of them.//
How will I know its love instead of lust, i can't.//
To me love has been a thing that i can only share with a friend.//
My ex, he did not love, all he did was call me ugly and fat.//
When will I know, when will it happen.//
I'll never know, because no guy will not hurt me.//
They all tell me, all it is, is sappy.//
How can they tell me a lie, such as love, i can't let it be.//

papiswifey 07-12-02 12:53 PM

thats deep. i really feel wutcha sayin. keep it up. one

LaDy TrInItY 07-14-02 10:03 PM

hmm aight ...uppin

The Necromancer 07-15-02 12:30 AM

::In cheesy french accent:: Ah, love. But of course it is the bane of all things false. ... I thought I was in love a long time ago, turned out I just had gas.

Ookay, seriously babe, this is a great peice. I mean, I couldn't tell any flow from it though, but it's still thought provoking. Seemed like something you wrote thinking more with your head then heart. There is all sorts of love. Like the love between a man and a woman or the love between a man and a fine cuban cigar. (Personally I don't like cigars, so that leaves me with the first option.)

Mo-Mentai.

BaByGeE894 07-16-02 12:10 AM

I see where you coming from. Alot of dudes make iish all sappy just so they can get some booty. So it makes it hard on the real men. Just take ur time..don't rush. Don't give into every guy that comes along bu don't be so negative..you lose alot of good guys like that. Holla.

hisTRYwreCKEr 07-16-02 12:46 AM

nice piece

very deep boo

keep it up

HOLLA


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