Spoken Prophecy vs gunit.101
 

Battle Rules:

16 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 12-21-04 at 02:48 PM

Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in.

gunit.101 has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-21-04 02:07 PM.

Spoken Prophecy has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-21-04 02:08 PM.

Fuckin wit me kid, you best be numbered ya days
Cuz i aint talkin nintendo when i say SP is played
Really yo, just run away hide and lock all ya doors
Cuz shit even my check in is sittin on top of yours!
Youre a fuckin nerd, and there isnt a need to lie b
I dont know whats more streched,
...............................ya rhymes or tighty witeys.
So know your gettin hypocritical,wonder wats next
the fuck can you speak a prophecy battling in TEXT?
So sit back kids, just watch as Spoken gets rattled
My record now is the opposite of his after this battle!
His whack verse couldnt come close enough to hurt me
He wants "8 bars" like fat people begging for Hersheys
Hes a nerd whos always been wishin of being black
But at least he keeps his whack beef on WHACKS (wax)
Plus hes a faggot, we all really know who hes lovin
Cuz fact is hes even a ho-mo than his loving husband!

:gfy:

nail u wit tha hammer for givin me a screw eye...
u die and whos by u when tha shots go off...will loose lives...1
so choose wise for who rides cuz ya best man b layin... right were u lie.....2
its tru guys...
i move by in suoped up new trucks while u fuks is couped up i shoot up anything that moves so nigga move up..3 or move back choose that no matter what u do u not gonna shoot back 4
It's official...time's as critical as the words of G-Unit hypocrites
Pass that Black, I'll bet I get it lit...my news is fit to print ..5
An all out jack move...cockin back, shoot
Guerilla war for more, bring back the zoo ..6
Let the beast out, kick ass with both feet out
That was me way back when...this is me now ..7
Then dare pigs to chase after me, when I made ya skull fragments
This aint shit I imagine...bitch, I'll make this happen...if its war, say no more: you missing in action 8

aiyo sun somebuddy needa votez on dizz sheiyt.....

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can we please get some votes please thsi battle has been going on for a week now!!

This was feedback posted for Spoken Prophecy
 

checkin polls n shit yo..........................................

yo why does it take so long for one battle to get voted on

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Voted For: Spoken Prophecy

aight cool battle...ya'll gota go with dis dude tho he aint have n punchlines but his multis made up 4 all dat shit...101 umm u had a few punchlines but ya ryhme scheme was wack..u won da personals i think spoken's first 4 lines won dis whole battle

opener-spok..101 good personal i aint like da way it ryhme
structure-101
punchlines-101
flow-spok
wordplay-spok
multis-spok
creativity-a tie
personals-101
finisher-spok
enjoyed-spok..he got dis....

links r in da sig return da favor ya'll

Voted For: gunit.101

aight good battle both of you... kinda one sided tho... break down:

G-Unit- Good structure dawg, shit was evend out and that helped ya flow out a lot and that was tight.. punches and personals hit hard and that is what wins battles and everyone knows that.. vocab was aight would have liked to see more multis but thats cool... metas were tight and complex which helps big time... shit was creative and interesting.... overall good verse 7/10

Spoken- structure was bad... lines were not even and you need to lose the #s after every line cause it fucks up flow and shit... people who know how to read can tell where a line ends and dont need a number to tell them... any way the punches and personals were aight but could have been better, like his id like to have seen more multis but its aight... you had less vocab and wordplay as G did.. your metas were ok... overall id say this was a medium to lower level verse... 4.5/10

overall good battle by both but Spoken elevate dawg, no hate homie but in my opinion this was all Gunit in this battle... no hate tho... stay up and elevate homie......... good battle

VOTE- Gunit

oh and i would have that vote by marv deleted cause it aint explained at all and its plain to see that G won this.... no hate... pc

how u going to have my vote deleted it did explain he did it in categories all because he didnt have the same result as u dont mean tnothin an du only doing this becuas ei votes against u in a battle but its coo because anybody can see my verse was way tighter

it's wuddeava dunny, i got dis shieyt on lock, holla back