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-Emotions- ft LadyGangsta
~[Lady Gangsta]~ ive been called a fraud and a coward, they think im scared to do shit but when the time feels right, im a nasty tru bitch they ask me how i do it, how do i just produce shit? but when u live thru it, it just turns to music my skool aint no ghetto, just sum white trashy wannabes they think its wrong that i rap, its sick, just the thought of me but it gives me the strength and the power just 2 pull shit outta me they treat me like a lepper, but thats who i am, then im proud 2 b ive tried fitting in, but with every day id just slip out no use im pissed now, regret everytime i tripped out well, maybe i did it 4 my own personal satisfaction crazy like a maniac in action, just 2 eye sum reaction all the stares and laughs, whispers behind my back rumors that im an addict to crack, but they dont know it they're facts call me a slut and a ho, they dont think im a virgin i havent had sex, but theres still sexual urges but i just pull myself together, dont grief on it much i just stay brief on the such, even though they treat me like fuck and ill keep giving up, but i gotta stay strong thru word of mouth, every spit, every song every rhyme, every vere, every secret i blurt every instance of hurt, disrespecting my worth im ready 2 do this, git past the pain and when i make my first million, they can all rot in vein but til then, i gotta stick with my truce cause this gift god gave me, is 2 precious 2 lose so ill use it in the way that makes me feel most alive im here 2 set my revenge, from the name, from the lies ~[StreetRyda]~ boastin to my boys as you passin me sayin 'what u think'? but then i herd tham mutter damn what was she drinkin thinkin i wouldnt hear i played it off like everthing was kewl but i knew then they were jealous of that girl i pulled ill fool them and make em even more envious of her beauty truely if they think she's too good they really aint knew me feelin a bond destrengthen between us with that little remark emotions come to senses when notions of jealousy begin to start reguardless her attributes your supposed to have pride in me inticingly growin apart from ppl who are supposed to abide in me finding these actions morally wrong and my grip starts to tighten fightin was never an option until mouths started poppin so it brighten writin to tell you my emotions of how i boasted about my girl but yet my boys wanted to do nothing to cheer me up, insulted me instead i wrote mine fast so i appologize for it lacking...... |
uppin this bitch come on now dont sleep on it
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I feel both of you on this. Fuck who got problems wif you. I liked it. Real good from both of you. LadyGangsta hot rhymes flow and poetic feeling. I saw this as a poem sorta. No beat but what ever it was hot. 10/10
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Oh and don't forget to return da favor. Click on both links. DML and No End.
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cats weak like whack headgear you misled here Dililah done Samson even with a gun and ranson money you couldn't get away
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Good Shit I Was Feeling This Piece, The Flow Vocabulary Was Goood, Nice Emotions 10/10
Retrun The Favor With My Open Mics |
aight, thanx all.............. uppin
n madcat, fuck u..... |
all i gotta say bout dis 1 is woah........dats all u can say 10/10
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ha HA! chea. uppin, n thanx 4 tha luv!
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uppin this shit.............thanks fo the feed............
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Chea nice flow, i wouldnt say whoa~!, upp the vocab. Lady gangstah dont stretch your lines that much. Good poem, Much creativity needed in your verse streetrydah 8/10 and thats coming from an person that read the whole damn thing~!. No beef's.
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You need 2 links, or they'll close this. peace ...
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Flow was good with both of verses, streetryda's vocab was clearly better but emotion was there in the two parts...you both dropped from the core, real stuff and it's always nice to read. I wouldn't say 10/10 though cuz i don't believe in perfection but a nice 8 is appropriate here...Concept has been done before but this genuine shit always works...Nice drop...
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thank yall. uppin!!!
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critique
yo great drop fam and big ups to ladygangsta straight killed it give ya a 10/10 on the shit...i liked both verses and keep doin what ya doin ladygangsta :spit: :spit:
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