Theories of the mind(peep this)
 

new theories gave purpose to the same worthless hate urchins
homosapiens share belief of control over our own brain circuits
in changed wordage so ya gettin me clearly that's identity theory
though that lesson is merely a gateway to questions an querries
all fearing the truth excites us until it exposes the truths inside us
no concious control of the tubes that tie us to our views an bias
say its useless science? explore ya soul escape the tortured mold
the truth is pure as gold, realize ya mind isn't really in your control
stop believing the world you touch and feel is the one thats real
allow concious thought to evaporate reveal subconcious appeal
feelings reveal more held inside ya mind than the entire outside
fear time love hate doubt-pride shame ignorance lies and outcry
now try ta imagine dimensions whos depth goes beyond our own
wit energies that interact concious known charging quadranomes
I ponder those inspiring brain activity power to cycle dimensions
my body feels hyperly tensive but why? is now likely the question
if the minds an invention my worries are who's the soul controller
maybe smokin dope is sober an my grasp on reality is almost over
release ya concious an fears think out every thought that appears
is ya mind even part of ya brain or were ya just taught ta hear near ya ears?????

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