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Gkillaz05 vs Eclipse
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Eclipse has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-22-04 11:46 AM.
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" killaz", yo' skillz have the effectiveness of a ''marshmellow bunny",
fucker... lyrics come to be passed down...not stolen..that ain't' funny. you shouldnt be talking about how big yo' weenie is online bitch nobody gives a fuck how big you say it is, we get tits........*:)* you should start savin' up on alot of life support,if u get tha' chance rappin' ain't ' yo' hobby....maybe you'd have a chance if you took lessons to "dance." my gat is like my skills busting holes into yo back, neck, and head pretty soon you'll be throwing up, and spitting out all of that hot lead. this "battle", as you would call it, is all but the real thing.....for sure rapperz' on rv dont like to hear your shit bitch....stop imatating lil' mother fucker. rapperz' on rv dont like to hear your shit bitch....stop imatating=stop imatating a rapper |
GKillaz05 has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-29-04 02:21 PM.
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I must diss this kid cant w"RAP" and it was just Chirstmas...
Smokin' another whack herb to throw onto my shit list... What were you thinkin' settin' this up?.. ya dumb fuck... Its like you only got 8 fingers - you never see thumbs up... I got this crum underneath me like a cherry cheese cake... How many rhymes can these fake MC's take b4 they break... Not many, Eclip's got to steal my keyboard to grab the W... Dont even have to write something smart to trouble you... Wanna See?... BLU BLAH BLAH HE HE HO HA HA HI IN... I aint lyin - Just said a bunch of shit and fuck I still win... |
Voted For: GKillaz05
killaz nice shit... good flow and some nice punches in there... I must diss this kid cant w"RAP" and it was just Chirstmas... Smokin' another whack herb to throw onto my shit list... ^^ good i see the x mas thing goin on there What were you thinkin' settin' this up?.. ya dumb fuck... Its like you only got 8 fingers - you never see thumbs up... ^^ nice punch I got this crum underneath me like a cherry cheese cake... How many rhymes can these fake MC's take b4 they break... ^^ dont really get that one but aight Not many, Eclip's got to steal my keyboard to grab the W... Dont even have to write something smart to trouble you... ^^ see a punch building up Wanna See?... BLU BLAH BLAH HE HE HO HA HA HI IN... I aint lyin - Just said a bunch of shit and fuck I still win... ^^ nah not really feelin that one... overally i thought your verse was good with some good punches i give it 8/10 ecplise your verse was good but i didnt see it as good as killaz... " killaz", yo' skillz have the effectiveness of a ''marshmellow bunny", fucker... lyrics come to be passed down...not stolen..that ain't' funny. ^^ ok punch i guess maybe a personal i dont know you shouldnt be talking about how big yo' weenie is online bitch nobody gives a fuck how big you say it is, we get tits........** ^^ not really feelin this you should start savin' up on alot of life support,if u get tha' chance rappin' ain't ' yo' hobby....maybe you'd have a chance if you took lessons to "dance." ^^ pretty funny i liked this line my gat is like my skills busting holes into yo back, neck, and head pretty soon you'll be throwing up, and spitting out all of that hot lead. ^^ not bad but a bit of creativity could av bin a good punch this "battle", as you would call it, is all but the real thing.....for sure rapperz' on rv dont like to hear your shit bitch....stop imatating lil' mother fucker. ^^nah and agen i wasnt feelin it overall your verse lacked the punches that killaz took it with.. alright battle in the end but i think that killaz won it... no hate return the favour links in the sig pz. |
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Voted For: GKillaz05
open: GKilaz05: "I must diss this kid cant w"RAP" and it was just Chirstmas... Smokin' another whack herb to throw onto my shit list...". -Very nice. Keeping with tha time at the mo. Funny, metaphor, hard punch that landed clse: Gkillaz05: "Wanna See?... BLU BLAH BLAH HE HE HO HA HA HI IN... I aint lyin - Just said a bunch of shit and fuck I still win..." -Just shows you doesnt it really. A cheeky ending that worked and made him look silly. Eclipse's best bar: "you should start savin' up on alot of life support,if u get tha' chance rappin' ain't ' yo' hobby....maybe you'd have a chance if you took lessons to "dance." -This is good, if only more of the verse was as good as this. Good punchline GKillaz05's best bar: "Not many, Eclip's got to steal my keyboard to grab the W... Dont even have to write something smart to trouble you..." -On another level this is. Good metaphor, heavy handed punch to brutalise the slapping. Overall: There really aint no contest in this. GKillaz05 verse was better by far and on a completely different level. Eclipse's verse was based on a few "ok" punches. No wordplay metaphors ar really intelligent work in it at all. Whereas GKilla had all that with an entertaining verse to match. Even got in the references to Christmas. Easy vote for me |
Voted For: GKillaz05
Str8 up this was a OK battle...I give Structure to GKilla cuz it was easier to read so there for he had betta flow...Punches from both sides were weak so that was a tie...Vocab goes to Gkilla..Personals were lackin in this battle so dat was a tie..Multis N Metas were Ok from both sides but that was a tie in my opponion... v/Gkillaz05 http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=168953 ^^return da favor |
Voted For: GKillaz05
eclipse... hmm not to much goodness in your verse but you did have a good stucture with some tight punches and wordplay even tho they werent completely there...your vocab was pretty good your flow was great in all but you didnt get this in my eye.....no hate pz Gkillaz: hmmm not the best ive seen from you but you always use some good flow with some good stuucturizing you use soem nice wordplay i like it alot...and you have some normal punches to i like that alot....lol i found lots of secrets in your verse;)...jk...but you got this one no ahte to both pz return the favour links are in the sig |
Voted For: GKillaz05
eclipse: " killaz", yo' skillz have the effectiveness of a ''marshmellow bunny", fucker... lyrics come to be passed down...not stolen..that ain't' funny. dont really get it but its ight....4/10 you shouldnt be talking about how big yo' weenie is online bitch nobody gives a fuck how big you say it is, we get tits........** not getting this at all.....0/10 you should start savin' up on alot of life support,if u get tha' chance rappin' ain't ' yo' hobby....maybe you'd have a chance if you took lessons to "dance." um some good wordplay here settle for a 7/10 my gat is like my skills busting holes into yo back, neck, and head pretty soon you'll be throwing up, and spitting out all of that hot lead. not bad could be a lil better 3/10 this "battle", as you would call it, is all but the real thing.....for sure rapperz' on rv dont like to hear your shit bitch....stop imatating lil' mother fucker. im not sure what your trying to say...4/10 not bad verse coulda been better....no hate but you didnt use anything to make me go whoa...pz GKillaz I must diss this kid cant w"RAP" and it was just Chirstmas... Smokin' another whack herb to throw onto my shit list... not bad could of been better but nice wordplay...7/10 What were you thinkin' settin' this up?.. ya dumb fuck... Its like you only got 8 fingers - you never see thumbs up... nice punchlines ill give you a 8/10 I got this crum underneath me like a cherry cheese cake... How many rhymes can these fake MC's take b4 they break... nothing to great here but good flow....5/10 Not many, Eclip's got to steal my keyboard to grab the W... Dont even have to write something smart to trouble you... nice play on words....9/10 Wanna See?... BLU BLAH BLAH HE HE HO HA HA HI IN... I aint lyin - Just said a bunch of shit and fuck I still win... pretty good bar here kinda dumb tho lol...3/10 you had soem tight shit.....i give you this easily....no hate to both pz ... return the favour lnks in the sig |
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