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ryano 07-12-02 03:50 PM

RYANO vs GUILLOTINE
 
the rules
no hates votes
no crew votes
no d/r
3-0(ko)
5 to win

kadafi 07-12-02 04:51 PM

Don’t have the chance to ejaculate/
Son, like impotent dicks, you need to elevate/
Ryano aint posted an I’m ready to celebrate/
This a battle kid, why you tryin to collaborate/
I detonate an explode like the Oklahoma bomb/ (~peep his location)
A battle verse spittin first with perfection/
Another win for da collection /
I gotta ask, can you take rejection ??? /
No kid, I aint got no affection, only beef/
You got served, sunk like the great barrier reef/
ryano~cerous with a dick instead of a horn/
I’m only speakin my mind~ mind full of scorn/

^ edited out " "

ryano 07-12-02 06:43 PM

next time u rhyme, spend some more time prewritting ur lines/
chop u up more then ur chopy ass rhymes/
cock back and make u blind, but not till after u see the red light shine from the nine/
yo raps is like a mexican tryin to cross the border, u barely gettin by/
guillotine, wut u mean, can take rejection/
...i changed yo girls dark skined complection to light when she sees the enormus size of my erection/
ur in the way of a run away locomotive/
me and yo girl is closet freaks, doin shit u neva heard of/
from now on u betta walk around wit yo guard up/
talkin about beef that u wusnt ready to start up/

Nefarious Lev 07-12-02 09:34 PM

Words of advice for Guillotine. Take that "ryano" out of ya verse cause it's that new rule or whatever. No "", {}, or bold texts and shit like that.

De Niro 07-12-02 09:49 PM

dis battle wuz kinda weakish..none of u came with any eye-catchin punches..and da same daily vocab..

but my vote goes to acidic cuz his verse wasnt abc like gulls shyt..

vote: acidic


out

sK!LLz 07-12-02 10:01 PM

lmmfao hahaha
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wrong battle de niro

SoN GunnCLaPPa 07-12-02 11:05 PM

Guillotine verse:

Quote:
Don’t have the chance to ejaculate/
Son, like impotent dicks, you need to elevate/
Ryano aint posted an I’m ready to celebrate/
This a battle kid, why you tryin to collaborate/
I detonate an explode like the Oklahoma bomb/ (~peep his location)
A battle verse spittin first with perfection/
Another win for da collection /
I gotta ask, can you take rejection ??? /
No kid, I aint got no affection, only beef/
You got served, sunk like the great barrier reef/
“ryano”~cerous with a dick instead of a horn/
I’m only speakin my mind~ mind full of scorn/


ok guillotine...you didn come with many punches but the ones you did came with were alright...opening bar was kinda forced..almost like you just needed a bar to go with the next one...good verse for a keystyle...

RYANO verse:

Quote:
next time u rhyme, spend some more time prewritting ur lines/
chop u up more then ur chopy ass rhymes/
cock back and make u blind, but not till after u see the red light shine from the nine/
yo raps is like a mexican tryin to cross the border, u barely gettin by/
guillotine, wut u mean, can take rejection/
...i changed yo girls dark skined complection to light when she sees the enormus size of my erection/
ur in the way of a run away locomotive/
me and yo girl is closet freaks, doin shit u neva heard of/
from now on u betta walk around wit yo guard up/
talkin about beef that u wusnt ready to start up


ryano...kinda good multis if this were a keystyle im not sure if these verses were or wasn't but your punches were kinda off to me...i got em...but they just didn't make any since...openin bar was great but kinda faded in the end...

Overall:

imma have to go with guillotine on this one...his punches were more directed tawards ryano...ryano, understand this is text, talkin about his girl or whoever isnt gonna hurt him in words, you could probably pass in an audio like that...

Vote: Guillotine

kadafi 07-13-02 11:52 AM

we countin De Niro or not? i dont think so seein as he voted for acidic...lmao...

uppin

UN-XPECTED 07-13-02 12:01 PM

THIS BATTLE WASN'T ALL THAT TIGHT BUT I THINK THAT GUILLOTINE WON THIS FA SHO...HIS VERSE WAS JUST OVERALL BETTER THAN RYANO....HIS PUNCHES WERE MUCH HARDER THAN RYANO'S TOO..

VOTE=QUILLOTINE

kadafi 07-13-02 03:28 PM

2-0

up

C.F.C 07-13-02 05:55 PM

I though Ryano won this one i felt hi flow was better his punches was better don't get me wrong Guillotine u had some sick punches but they was'nt as good so

vote=Ryano

kadafi 07-14-02 09:34 AM

2-1

up

Essentialz 07-15-02 01:35 PM

my vote goes to guillotine, ryano had a chance to attack back at his verse but came up short and sorry. Over all a pretty weak battle, but I think guillotine's punches were more directed towards ryano, other than his gurl or sum shit.
VOTE=GUILLOTINE
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kadafi 07-15-02 03:54 PM

3-1

up

ryano 07-15-02 04:44 PM

uppin


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