Tragic Wit Tactics
 

New fiya joint from yourz truly holla back with the feedback

It's an alright track, I got that beat, quality was horrible. With more clarity I could tell you a little more, but I could barely understand it, good work though, stay up.

-Tactics

Fixed wrong version on it

streaming now....

beats aight..... some mozzart type ish.......

flow.... typical thirdself style..... flow was dope....

quality..... improved over the last joint i peeped... :thumbup:

lyrics.... they was straight..... you've come iller.... but the track was still flames.......

imma take a second listen now.....

..... i think it was the beat that hindered you on this track...... concept was dope.... cant give negative feed.... cuz this wasnt a bad track..... i was feeling it.... i juss think it was the beat.... i know i wouldnt have been able to spit to this... but as much as anyone could, you did justice to it no doubt...

:thumbup:

overall 7.5

"ez"

dope intro...dont like the vocal effect on the intro....theres no emotion in ya voice man...flow is mad stiff lyrics r far to simple ...get a thesaurus homie...ummmm production needs work use more similies more metas all that ish man...get a better mic..work on bringing more emotion to ya voice and delivery

let me see.....

Beat is aight......Vocals are way too loud.....flow is nice, Delivery needs some work don't seem like you really into it. It be a good idea to invest in a new mic, vocal quality is pretty low vocals should come down too.

but besides that, track is pretty solid...nice drop..

peace

i like it, i dont like it when ppl have emotion in their tracks, sometimes its good and needed, but i think it just seems more real if u just spit and dont try to fake emotion, ya know. good song mayne. 7/10 fo sho.