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Magical vs Kilo704
Battle Rules:
6-10 lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting only vote if you understand punchlines and wordplay due 1 day and 9 hours after check in... Minimum posts to vote: 200 Check in by: 12-25-04 at 08:39 PM Must drop verse in 2000 minutes after check in. Closed - Expired / old battle win |
yo man accept i know your online....lol...im gonna write my verse now..just be known im a straight up herb faggot..:)
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Kilo704 has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-22-04 08:57 PM.
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Magical has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-22-04 08:59 PM.
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elevation's no issue nigga all u gotta do is come wit ya hardest/1
but from tha looks of ya 1st battles u a sorry excuse 4 a choke artist/2 ya rhymes is gay,nigga u dont even stop bullshittin long enough 2 think/3 i seen betta punchlines at proms waitin 4 some nigga 2 shit in they drink/4 my lyrics lift spirits of lowly men who always sleep alone in bed/5 i process lines like a cyrix and leave opponents defeated and dead/6 ya rhymes'll neva elevate a inch, same goes 4 ya lil sleepy dick/7 tha only chance u have of winnin this battle is doin a magic trick/8 see this battles already won 4 me so consider dis lil diss my closing/9 mike only likes little boys so quit showin up at his mansion proposing/10 |
You’re a real wack ass when you stepped up to me
Ur barely worth time, ur rhymes equal crap probably You’re a little 13 year old like shit, dos it get any younger Try to win, it aint gon happen even if u have more hunger I hope your not one of them people that like to run shit Around here u can desire anything u wish only if u got a permit Cuz im gonna be runnin you over here, well at the moment Every second & consequences u own will never be decent |
hmm pretty good for a newbie....good luck...:thumbup:
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This was feedback posted for Magical
i would vote for magical but i cant vote...becuz of a certian reason but w/e pz..
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anyone gonna vote..like damn foshizzles.....weerdizzle
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4real..........dis battle been sittin 4 a minute yo.......
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Voted For: Magical
OK overall this was more of a "STRUCTURE BATTLE" you both had nice structure but who cares lets see that VOCAB...lol...but yea...Magical came harder in all areas.....i mean his lines weren't played as much......i mean kilo your shit was played a bit...magical so was yours...i mean some real played vocab...but its all nice.......keep it up... ~1~ |
Voted For: Kilo704
damn Aii Heres my vote Personals Punchez multi's vocab meta's ......................all go to Kilo Structure ......................goes to magical *********************************************** The Favor Better Be return or else lol j/k*************** * but plz do im askin as a favor plz do return the favor....peace************************************ Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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