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Speats 12-22-04 09:16 PM

XCell vs X-Spitty
 
Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 12-25-04 at 09:16 PM

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System 12-22-04 09:17 PM

X-Spitty has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-22-04 09:17 PM.

Speats 12-22-04 09:18 PM

come on man accept this.................................

System 12-23-04 03:26 PM

xcell has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-23-04 03:26 PM.

The Militant 12-23-04 04:06 PM

aint no way u gonna win u dont stand a chance
it was over b4 it started call the ambulance/
u dont wanna start a feud
i got u crapin in ure pants like mexican food/
ure only way u can beat me is thourgh masturbation
i cut u off at ure point like casteration
i rip u viscously like laceration/
ya cant erase me im finna make u taste me
im a virus ill kill u next time u face me/

Speats 12-23-04 06:43 PM

Illusion bitch thaught this was ''just the begining''*...
I traveled all of your threads,you aint even elevating?...
''Let it go'' Xcell imma merk you aswell *...
Wack enought to be a crime and sended to jail...
you won twice,and both of them was newby's...
while one didnt post shit,yo wack'' and alwasy''* be...
S'only getting wurst,You called out Phenom-In-All...
Youd lost anyway,S'was only to show that you had balls...
But you dont,you lost them twice and regain them by forfeit,
Your an eminem fan and still aint showing respect...
U acting like your retarded and rime like a cadet...
Sorry for the revelation,but the truth must be said!...
Fuck me making a fucking conclusion...
youll never beat me,like your old alias,its an illusion...

*1- he made an open mix called Just The Begining...
*2-Let It Go to was an open mic
*3-And alwasy be....i dont know if it was really him who made that like that but its suppose to be and always...

Speats 12-23-04 06:56 PM

uppin this............................................

Parallel 12-23-04 07:10 PM

Voted For: X-Spitty

xcell
hmmm pretty decent...not the greatest ive seen on rv lol pretty godd stucture and flow but you came pretty damn weak on the wordplay and punchlines in fact you didnt even use punchlines or wordplay in your verse...sry but to be honest you need elevation...no hate pz

X-Spitty
not bad probably one of the best ive seen from you in a text battle but you need to work more on using punchlines more on a consistant bases you used them but you need to use them more and wordplay i didnt see anything to great there...not bad tho keep trying...pz

VOTE...X-Spitty

return the favour in one of the battles in my sig...thanks

Speats 12-23-04 07:12 PM

iight thanks....uppinnnnnn........................

Speats 12-23-04 07:26 PM

up up up up up up upupupupupupupupupûpupupupupupu^p

Coopa Bang 12-23-04 10:50 PM

This was feedback posted for X-Spitty
 
checkin pollz....nice jobe crew buddy......

Speats 12-23-04 11:31 PM

still uppinnnnnn........................................ ..

Speats 12-24-04 12:07 PM

up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up....favor will be return

Wickedclown 12-24-04 12:27 PM

Voted For: X-Spitty

aight this shit is...well... ONE SIDED AS FUCK.............break down right here:

Xcell- ya shit needs some elevation dawg... no hate but ya strucure is awfull, rhyme scheme is bad, punches and personals were nonexistant..... vocab was childish.... shit was just bad dawg... dont really need more of an explination than that... fix it homie or ya gonna lose some battles... 1/10

Xspitty- ya shit was pretty good, u didnt need much to beat him but ya structure needs a little work, lose the ... after every line it screws up flow... even ya lines out more too... punches were good as were personals so props on that, vocab was good, your elevating well.....good drop 5/10

all in all one sided... no hate Xcell but elevate dawg.... big time.....

VOTE-Xspitty.......................................

Sik Wit It 12-24-04 01:03 PM

Voted For: X-Spitty

Illusion bitch thaught this was ''just the begining''*...
I traveled all of your threads,you aint even elevating?...
decent
''Let it go'' Xcell imma merk you aswell *...
Wack enought to be a crime and sended to jail...
decent
you won twice,and both of them was newby's...
while one didnt post shit,yo wack'' and alwasy''* be...
okay…
S'only getting wurst,You called out Phenom-In-All...
Youd lost anyway,S'was only to show that you had balls...
no…
But you dont,you lost them twice and regain them by forfeit,
Your an eminem fan and still aint showing respect...
no…
U acting like your retarded and rime like a cadet...
Sorry for the revelation,but the truth must be said!...
good
Fuck me making a fucking conclusion...
youll never beat me,like your old alias,its an illusion...
average…nuttin much here

aint no way u gonna win u dont stand a chance
it was over b4 it started call the ambulance/
no
u dont wanna start a feud
i got u crapin in ure pants like mexican food/
no
ure only way u can beat me is thourgh masturbation
i cut u off at ure point like casteration
i rip u viscously like laceration/
no
ya cant erase me im finna make u taste me
im a virus ill kill u next time u face me/
no

Spitty took this one…punches were harder
And structure was decent w/ it…


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