Emcee vs girlmerkinu
 

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girlmerkinu has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-23-04 12:19 AM.

Emcee has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-23-04 12:30 AM.

girls are still battling? guess you're one of the very few
everyone hates you...no wait nobody actually knows you
time for termination...and this bitch's a honory mention
you weirder than Oprah interviewing at a KKK convention
a girl merkin me? I'll destroy you you'd think I'ma girlbasher
I'm that much better girl...cuz I don't post periods bastard
I find it hard to believe...a girl's posting that much, crap
but we can see most of her posts are all in "Bitch Slapped"
sorry to break your heart girl...but we all know whats right
even if u wrote in Arial Narrow your rhymes still won't be tight
my rhymes are that twisted...I've been claimed overate...
your face is so twisted...it makes your voting ring straight!

drop soon girl...............I've already dropped mine

youve Failed as an Emcee Fallen Flat on ur Face
pussy rhymes ur a femcee im the grande dame *1
as an emcee u just just get the crowd ready 4 the finale *2
poll taken tally 5-0 ko maybe ur raps are just a sally *3
win needs to be returned because it was unearned *4
real record will be 0-1 cause im giving u a free 180* turn
shows fake records bur doesnt care no pube hairs *5
yea thats about as played as u sayin u from somewhere *5
be aware LIL boy at 14 ull get no respect ask xclusive *5
LOSING IS LIKELY unless u bite lyrics like reckless *6



definiton of grande dame of hire power and capabilities *1

Definitions of emcee: a person who acts as host at formal occasions (makes an introductory speech and introduces other speakers) *2


Definitions of sally:a venture off the beaten path *3
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=167101 4
all info from his profile *5
hes young i called him LIL *6

Voted For: girlmerkinu

eh

punches- Emcee, more and harder hittin. GMU,you need to work on your punches, played ones and not hard hittin.
personals- GMU, had more, not quite as hard, but more of em. Emcee, u had some, but they r wack, and played.
multis- Neither
metas- Emcee, just cuz u had em. GMU, work on em.
word play- neither
flow- Emcee, ya wordin and "punches" flowed better overall. GMU, it wuz ok, work on it though.
structure- GMU, didnt use ... to make the structure work, Emcee, its aight, keep workin.
humor- Tie

GMU, weak verse overall. U had personals, which won u this battle. Work on your punches, and also your personals. U had em, but they werent very strong. Also, one of your lines didnt rhyme.

Emcee, played punches, racist ones too. Watch it, um really u need to stop usin played stuff and get more creative. Work on vocab and usin personals.

No Hate Just An Honest Voter

v/girlmerkinu

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Voted For: Emcee

EMCEE GOT MY VOTE BECAUSE HIS PUNCHES HIT ALOT HARDER THEN GIRLMERKINUI LIKED EMCEES FLOW HAD GOOD STRUCTRE RHYMES WERE TIGHT MULTIS WERE THERE PREETY GOOD
BEST LINE---I find it hard to believe...a girl's posting that much, crap
but we can see most of her posts are all in "Bitch Slapped"
(THAT LINE WAS HOT GOOD JOB)
GIRLMERKIN U U HAD AN IGHT VERSE AT TIMES A LIL HARD TO UNDERSTAND BUT THEN I SAW URE EXPLANTIONS AND THEY MAD A LITTLE MORE SENSE STILL A LITTLE UNCLEAR FLOW WAS GOOD U HAD GOOD STRUCTRE AND URE RHYMES THEY WAS GOOD BUT AGAIN ALITTLE HARD TO UNDERSTAN BUT PREETY GOOD
BEST LINE---win needs to be returned because it was unearned *4
real record will be 0-1 cause im giving u a free 180* turn
(PREETY GOOD BAR GOOD JOB0
PEACE.....

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