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Mesmerize 12-23-04 12:25 AM

Angel From Above
 
Alluring whispers disperse the somber tainted clouds
Mystic painted skies unfold acquainted visions aloud
Shrouds of golden mist fell upon the crowd with soothing bliss
A tranquil kiss descended to my cheek, forgetting all that exists
Enthralled yet appalled, feet grew roots into the ground
Confounded eyes arise, becoming magnetically bound
Trumpets begin to sound, feathers of golden satin unfurl
Still a silhouette in the sunset, has yet to reveal a girl
Teal eyes I can feel, swim through them into the ocean
Overcame with such emotion, drop my knees with devotion
She motions for me to rise and take her hand as she flies
Into a dwelling of everlasting life beyond the galaxy skies
In a world of tranquility, filling me with Gods symphony
My entity becomes transferred into a new soul of identity
Behold to capture majestic radiance within her delicate skin
Like porcelain antiseptic waters glow from the moons vivid grin
Hair of silken platinum flow beneath her expanded wings
Drapes lined of diamonds descend from her crown as she sings
Entering a dome filled of spring’s essence and pillowed thrones
Immaculate grass made of gold and roads of precious stones
Shown as the truest ecstasy, at such ease with harmony and love
Resting in eternal peace with my angel from above


George K.Stanza 12-23-04 12:26 AM

iller than anything here :)

Dabatos 12-23-04 10:05 PM

wow, this is seriously one of the best piece's i've read, it should be in open mic lol...
much props!!The vocab was amazing in here!!

10/10

plz return the favor

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...313#post1840313

Mesmerize 12-25-04 02:05 AM

thanks^ feedback anyone???


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